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LightDarkandChaos
2009-11-22 . chapter 6
Joshua's fault, right?
... Update soon? Please?
Khelc-sul Renai
2009-10-21 . chapter 6
This is really interesting! I like seeing Neku's thoughts as he goes through the past again. I wonder how long it will take him to realize he can use the app on the phone to change what day he's in? Preferably not until after more of Shiki's week, because this week really emphasizes the most how he's changed yet still the same.

Well written. Great idea and great read!
Silvaria
2009-10-02 . chapter 6
Nice job... Wiaiting for next one.
Oh, and you're not alone. He is scary if you pay attention.
prettypriestess
2009-09-25 . chapter 6
I was more angry than disturbed when Higashizawa got a ll speechy on Shiki. Kind of like Neku is, actually. He was such a jerk the first week. D:

But the way this is written? I kind of feel Shiki's pain, and wow. The inside of her head is a lot more depressing than I had previously suspected.

Also, "The pudding... of their DOOM!" Seriously. Higashizawa is really weird. D:

(A beautiful job, as always!)
Shadowclaw505
2009-09-24 . chapter 6
Hm, I had chills whenever I read Higashizawa's speech, too. I hated him, although his food talk made me laugh ('The proof is in the pudding... the pudding of your DOOM!'... really?). I WAS glad, though, when I got to beat him up!

Great chapter! Don't worry, most of us can wait for the next chapter!
Inspiration of Imagination
2009-09-24 . chapter 6
...That was done really well.
goatgod
2009-09-06 . chapter 5
sweet! keep up the good work!
EPIC WIN
2009-09-01 . chapter 5
EPIC WIN.
Shadowclaw505
2009-08-29 . chapter 5
Ugh! I HATED it when Rhyme died! She and Neku are my favorite characters.

I love how Shiki's trying to get Neku to wear girl's clothes. It's hilarious!

Great chapter! I really love this story. If I were Eiji, I would F this fic. F... for fabulous!
teacupz'
2009-08-29 . chapter 5
the way you describe things in this fic is nice!
and I will wait for the next update...
Silvaria
2009-08-29 . chapter 5
Wow... I can't really find anything to say... Other then put another chapter up, please?
You've pulled this off really well so far, and it's nice seeing inside Neku's head. That last line was perfect, and... Bleh, I hate when my mind won't give me anything. Now I'm just rambling, so update soon? Please?
teacupz'
2009-08-16 . chapter 4
it feels so fun to read this story... :)
and yes, the pig noises are so annoying... it's hard to erase them before they escape...

okay, I'm waiting for the update~
prettypriestess
2009-08-07 . chapter 4
Oh, this thing just gets more fun by the minute!

I made all the boys cross-dress the second they got brave enough. XD Neku was first. Joshua doesn't count because he has several girly items that can be bought the second you get him. I'd call it a little odd, but hey. I'll take anything that supports the slash. XD

I totally feel Shiki and Neku's pain with the pig. I hated that one. I never saw any Noise that was as much of a pain to beat as the pigs were. Seriously.
tenkage onna
2009-08-07 . chapter 4
ah. the magical pockets...wait, how do they not spill half of that food then? i know when i play, neku gets the crud kicked outa him alot. wouldnt that be amusing- "OMG get up neku quick quick q-...did he just drop the expensive ramen i bought?"

but anyways~ interesting take on this day =3 and really great job! i cant wait for the next X3
Silvaria
2009-08-07 . chapter 4
Hehe... Neku's stuck wearing the Yukata. And he's actually picking up on things now. Oh, I can't WAIT until he ,meets Josh. Funny, I'm already thinking of future chapters... And "Neku has long given up on solving the mystery of his magical practically-bottomless pockets" was just amazing. I mean, how much DOES he fit in there? And Shiki wanted to see him in the sailor suit? ...That would be pretty fun to see... *smaks self* Stop it!

Anyway, can't wait until the next chapter. Quite literally.
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