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bananacupcakes
2010-01-07 . chapter 15
Is that the end?
Mz Potter18
2010-01-05 . chapter 15
Wicked awesome story. I thought that the end was when Harry was brought back to life, so I was really surprised when it turned out that Harry was descended from Merlin himself, McGonagall was his grandmother, and Petunia's also. I loved this story! The fact that they could walk through mirrors were tight. So the twins and Luna's baby share the same birthday, along with Harry and Hermione's anniversary, and the Wizarding World's celebration of the day Harry got married, and the day that Merlin revealed himself to the Wizarding World. That was a busy day for everyone. The only thing I hated was the fact that Harry and Hermione lived next to the Weasley's when they could've lived anywhere. I really dislike Ron, Ginny and Molly. So did Merlin die when Harry died, or when Harry and McGonagall died?
tornadoblake2009
2009-12-23 . chapter 1
great chapter
gauravmittal2
2009-11-16 . chapter 15
its a nice story
omh666
2009-11-01 . chapter 15
Wow! As I said earlier, I almost never find a good story that is based after Voldemort's defeat. Key word here is almost. This is a rather good story. Thanks for writing it and even more for putting it on this site for people to read it.
omh666
2009-11-01 . chapter 6
As I said. I am not disappointed with the new turn in events. Great story thus far. I can't wait to finish reading it. On that note I think I'll do just that.
omh666
2009-11-01 . chapter 5
Now that you've gotten passed the major conflict that you've set in this story I'm wondering how it's going to continue. I almost never find a good story that takes place after Voldemort's defeat unless the author comes up with a new dark lord to take his place. However the other stories I've read by you are rather good so I guess I shouldn't expect to be disappointed on this one.
Kalen Darkmoon
2009-09-05 . chapter 15
Great little story. Added it to my favs.
pixiegold
2009-09-02 . chapter 15
This was a very nice story. I enjoyed it very much.
Wolfric
2009-08-31 . chapter 15
Congratulations on finishing your fine story. Thanks for writing. W.
Gandalf the Grey-Edelwiess
2009-08-31 . chapter 15
I loved it!
librarywitch
2009-08-31 . chapter 15
I can just picture Harry and Ron trying to get back home for the birth. Not afraid that they would miss the birth, afraid they would be dead if they did. That was another well done chapter. Thanks so much for sharing.
Ymere
2009-08-31 . chapter 15
very good story. I enjoyed it through and through.
GinnyLover14
2009-08-31 . chapter 15
Thanks for the story! Im very glad you avoided naming Harry's children James and Lily(let alone Albus/Severus)
Cateagle
2009-08-30 . chapter 15
A most eventful day with lots of causes for celebration. I do wonder what, if any, significance there is to all three kids arriving on the same day; that could make for interesting portents.
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