...I can't even discribe what I'm thinking. This was really...really...wow. just, amazing.

Kind of hard to read with those giant paragraphs, but good nonetheless. The best point of the fic is how descriptive you are.

That was a very well written story. The description was great, the plot was excellent and the flow of the story was smooth. I must say I respect you for making such a great work of art.

Wow Passion, very nice you have really out done yourself this this time. The use of the narrative format, the lack of speech just works, I believe that this is the best look into Azula's mind that you have done. The imagery used is just wonderful. I especially loved the ending, those two simple words and to quote Optimus Prime "Freedom is the Right of all Sentient Beings" and you definition summed it up quite nicely. Of course lets hope that the Sun spirit, Agni, is right that she will recover, which be a good idea for a sequel. A thought did occur to me about how the Sun and Moon affect the elements, the Sun controls Fire, but to me it also controls the Wind, Air, now that maybe a reason for Azula and Aang to get together. Anyway great work Passion, keep it up.

Your Obedient Reader,

Paladin13