Whoa, that was totally awesome, one of the best comashipping oneshots I've ever read! You don't fail at all, you excel!

For a while, I thought Ash was the drunk one and Paul was the sober one, but looks like I was wrong. xD You should probably make that more clear.

Also, Comashipping rocks my socks! Please write more Comashipping! =D

I love angst. So it's no surprise to me that this really touched me. And...I think, I can't stand the thought of Pikachu...dying. It's just not right in my mind. I think it made me cry ^^". Anyways, I like it :)

beautiful one-shot.

WOW. I really, really liked this! You're good at writing in second person!

This was a great story. Great job!

Whoa, that was amazing ^_^
Poor Ash, he got rejected :(

Ouch! Ash you just got rejected. D:
Now don't go running to Gary for comfort. D<

Hehe. It's sliideshow.
I really like this one-shot. It's written wonderfully.

I really like this oneshot!
Poor Ash though, I thought the ending was gonna be different..