I would have LOVED to see this written out. But this was good too. It has a full plot, which is something I haven't seen with a lot fo Hanmyo fics.
Its doesn't end with Hanmyo reuniting with Jim-Happy Ending!
Which would be really 'bleh'

Good luck with future stories!

Clever title. That particular one is missingt from the text, but alluded too.

'girl who was called Hanmyo' I like that. A constant reference to her lack of memories, and thus, of identity.

Two kinds of voids, that's also a interesting phrase.

Looks allright.
I like Hanmyo's coma nothinginess. I've never been in a comma, but that's kidna what I iamgined it would be like
However
I think it would be more effective, if it were more personal. Maybe phrase it as her thoughts, or avoid the 3-person pronouns

Well, the six years thing was a shock and disappointment to me. I know this would have been a good story.

Cool, an Outlaw fic about a pairing people actually like!

I hope to see more! Don't give up!

That was so freaking AWESOME!

I always wanted to see Hanmyo come back and be with Jim so THANK YOU SO VERY VERY MUCH!

Hanmyo was so cool a little girl assassin I always thought of her cats as like familiars and all the pirates know some magic thoguh not necessarily enough for combat and her also an expert martial artist though not to the extent of others in the show but compared to normal people awesome

And Shemi Leilong he was so cool as well I think it is a brilliant idea having him as well along with Hanmyo

Hm...this is interesting.

I look forward to seeing if and how you have Hanmyo and Jim reunite.

Also, I believe the assassin's name was Leilong. Hold on, let me go back and watch my DVDs again...

...Yup, it's Leilong.

I love fics with Hamnyo especially when she is with Jim.

excellent, I think Jim would be pleasantly surprised.

Very nice, the whole story is panning out nicely. I look forward to more!

BTW: Alex if you read the reviews, the pirate who faced his death is Shimi.

Yay! we found you again!

Angel: This is so nice! We had forgoton about it when we started reading other storys and couldnt find it again!!

AAries: This is a REALY great fic! Please oh please write more soon!!

Chaos: and bring James in sometime soon!!

AAries: As for the asassins name, we forgot a little while ago but if we find the notebook we were writing out fic in we might be able to email it to you!

As of this review, it has been 4 months and 24 days since your last update in this story and 3 months and a day since you last update of any story. Send us some sine you are alive and well at the other end of the modem.

By the way, good story so far. It is nice to see that the ONLY thing Jim even resembling girlfriend is not forgotten. I sense a resolution within the next chapter or two.

hey, you have to hurry and update. i love stories that hanmyo actually survives. even more when jim gets involved. i felt so bad 4 him when they killed her.

WOW!~ I'd gone away from the Outlaw Star section for MONTHS, I come back, and this fic has actually UPDATED. I adore this. I really do. You are one of the greatest Hanmyo writers to walk this earth~!