great story

great story.

great story.

I love this story! I want to see Harm find Robbie. Write that story as well as the one about Mac please. Thank you.

Hey, that was good. Very well done.

Thought you did a very good and interesting job capturing the life of young Harm and showing how one person can impact a life so much. It was great to read at the end that Harm wanted to look up his old friend, Robbie! Very good story!

i found this fic exceptional. many fics have been written about macs childhood as well as harms, but never from this point of view. i loved reading it.

I think you did an excellent job. You made clear that Harm's childhood shaped the man he is today, and you used great tone. When Harm was a kid, you wrote like a kid. As Harm "grew up", so did the words that you used! Congratulations on such a great story!

I loved your story! It almost made me cry. It was so touching to do it in a child's point of view. It was great.

Ohhh... I like it. Very touching, and very well done. Great!

I really did like this one. It was a neat look at how Harm became who he was. Thanks for it. =)

This was a very excellent story, you caught the mood and thoughts of a child during that time on the nail. Some of us have been there and done that. Thank you for such a wonderful story.

Interesting story. It was cool - you never really see Harm in his childhood, other than as five-second flashbacks. Great job. :) Please do one for Mac too - I need something more about her childhood other than it sucked and she was abused, etc. :)

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I enjoyed it. You wrote the story well through the eyes of a child.It's incredibly hard to do so once you are no longer one. You tackled that well. I enjoy everything I've read of yours so far and it was a nice change.

Pretty dang good.