I really liked this fic. I'm not going to say that it was perfect - nothing is - but I was really moved by all the sadness. It is understandable that Naruto would feel more close to Sasuke by grieving and that he's broken irreparably because of his death.

I also like how subtle you were about their intimacy (before Sasuke's death). Truly, I found this really touching :)

That's a really good piece you've got here.

First of all, I guess it's just the quirk I have, but I immensely enjoy character death fics where my fav. character dies. Yeah, I guess that's freaky but I can't really help it. And, plus, that's why I really enjoyed your fic. I loved it's genial simplicity, because it said much more than any fancy writing could. The created atmosphere was just oozing feelings and emotions, especially from Naruto's side.

So yeah, I don't know whether it's your first Naruto fic or just the first one you've published, but I really enjoyed it. It's a really good start so I hope you won't stop writing. Good luck with your next works and thank you for sharing (;

Cheers