...Go on...)

Gah...I like this. :P

More...?

o_o cool.

Man, Sly should be the less dominant one. Still this was great, I like the concept of a Fox/Sly, they are cute together.

Cute couple. Fluffy. :D

You have to make another oneshot based off of this...wow...

The funniest part to me was when Fox was dragging Sly by the collar with a knife in his hand..XD

Kinda fearful for Sly though. 0_0 lol

I'd like to see a twoshot from this, maybe Fox gets Cooper all flustered and stuff...? I mean Sly is always the charmer, so maybe Fox should turn the tables on him!
Haha...really write more of this!)

I skipped through the mature parts, but I still loved it!
Would you ever consider making another oneshot about these two, like fox gets revenge on his new love perhaps...?

The only mistake I saw was the fact that Fox's fur is a tanish gold color not gray.

Not much for this stuff, but it WAS well written. It could do with a bit more descriptive detail. Seems like someone reading this would want something with more... "action" in it... Just sayin'.

Excuse me while I throw up in a dumpster and take a shower... I'll be sure to keep an eye out for any peeping raccoons this time around, of that you can be assured P

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Good story ..

I'd love to see a sequel to this.

i found it funny as hell

Um. It was very... good.
Cooper and Fox? Didn't see it coming, but it looks like it hit the mark. I wonder what Carmelita has to say on this situation.

You know what, Fox and Carmelita have the same last name.

Fox.

That's funny.