 allanfrontrow 2009-10-02 . chapter 3Hi,
Well it seems that your dedicated audience can't leave an assumption unassumed - who would have thought that Hermione Granger could get something this wrong?
Talking of assumptions, nice one Mr Granger. Are we sure he & Ron aren't related? Stuff the colouring, they both seem to have the exact same fuse - short & likely to go off at the slightest provocation.
Hermione & Ron are starting to weave a very tangled web & without even trying.
Cheers,
Al. |
 NellieNotMolly 2009-09-04 . chapter 3This story is just so funny! I love the bit about the so-called affair. 'Believe me, Ron, I'm anything but calm.' Not that that's funny, but yeah, it's funny! :-)
Looking forward to more! |
 FinnFiona 2009-09-03 . chapter 3Still quite amusing and definitely a unique idea--I look forward to seeing how you extricate them from this little conundrum! |
 gosh so sweet 2009-09-02 . chapter 3Oh my gosh I read this the other day but my blackberry doesn't let me reply.
I absolutely adore this whole story.
Please update real soon! |
 Kou Shun'u 2009-09-02 . chapter 3oh i forgot to mention in the last chapter- you can eat chalk and not worry about the consequences?
kay well that answered my grangers/wilkins complaint.
"It's such a shame though, your arms are just...why is it always your arms?"
"I ask myself that same question!" I laughed and so did she. ^_^
love how the parents keep feeling the need to reassure ron that they love him too.
then the sugars and the teeth and: "You told us you were overpowered by the school nurse and she made you have them shrunk!" Her father turned and looked at her with betrayal. "Does everybody in this family lie now?"
^_^
yep i thought an affair story might come into play. oh boy. though awesome technique of ron's and and the hermione working into it.
this fic is so awesome thus far. oh boy when they come home... all the lies that will further be added on to maintain what they have now... its gonig to be a fun ride. |
 Kou Shun'u 2009-09-02 . chapter 2to start- hermione had changed their names to Wendell and Monica Wilkins. afterall whats the point into going into hiding, especially going as far as getting your memory wiped, if you keep your own name?
like how ron keeps coming to the rescue. cute with his fear of all the denist tools and procedures.
i really, really like how you did the scene where they are recovering their memories. i like the bits and pieces and errors (wesley) and then finally the confsion. i like how there was just so mch confussion then the blame... everything was done real nice, and then the hug at the end.
well done (except of course the name error). |
 Kou Shun'u 2009-09-02 . chapter 1well, i'll admit i was a bit fearful going into this fic. but i thought things are always happening to ron directly and not really around him and ron isnt that kind of person in your fics so it should be fine. so i was wondering how the incestous part was to play out. the brother sister angle played out but it appeared so fleetngly that it didnt even register but its cute that it did happen that way. i thought i totally hit the nail on the head when after the bits with "sorry dad", portakey, and failure came into play that ron an dhermione somehow switched bodies and were thus playing each other when retrieving the grangers. but no. well im curious to see how did they end up saying they are siblings (i can guess) and the grangers reactions when they see their kids necking. |
 Rhr4eva 2009-09-01 . chapter 3Hello,
Oh Crap!
Great work
Rhr4eva |
 silverbirch 2009-09-01 . chapter 3Hilarious! Really quality writing but with a good story running through it as well.
You can imagine the Grangers being this idealised middle-class family, but with a potential bit of dirty washing, and their lives turned upside down.
It's very clever. |
 ObsessedRHShipper 2009-09-01 . chapter 3Nice to see Ron being so supportive of the whole family. I wonder what other crisis will arrive, and when they will be headed back to England. |
 ChampionShoes 2009-09-01 . chapter 3oh that really sucks for Hermione! great story line! |
 Rhr4eva 2009-08-14 . chapter 2Hello,
Oh! That;'s so sad. But, why would they do that? Why didn't they just jump in and tell them? I'm confused...
Great work
Rhr4eva |
 Rhr4eva 2009-08-14 . chapter 1Hello,
Oh... hmm... why?
Great work
Rhr4eva |
 allanfrontrow 2009-08-06 . chapter 2Hi,
Ron calm Hermione overreacting and panicing? The last time I saw a relationship like theirs it was on an oscilloscope.
Considering the cicumstances Ron, when you are in a hole, stop digging.
Cheers, |
 allanfrontrow 2009-08-06 . chapter 1Hi,
I see that you have come up with a new (and potentially very entertaining) way to bend Ron out of shape and you've invited Hermione to the party as well. Great stuff.
Cheers, |