Awesum, luv ur stuff.

fantastic story!

i've been trying to find a gavin & stacey fanfic for ages, yours was the first one to pop up!

had tears welling in my eye when Nessa told Smithy to back off,then she changed her mind at the end, aw!

Hope you write some more, it's been a priveledge to read this! :D

xo

Love Bryn's obsession with Gene. Who could blame him, eh? I think you should do a crossover fic - Pam and Mick c.1983 mix it with Gene and Alex. Essex girls and boys come to town and cause bovver. Maybe Gav is mini-Gene (or mini-Ray) after Pam disgraces herself. Sorry - it's getting away from me. Carry on with this one first...

Great to see a Gavin & Stacey fic :)

You may need to make sure it flows grammatically, sometimes it's hard to follow who is saying what, etc, but great start!

hmm, nice to see a fanfic in the Gavin and Stacey fandom, even if it is just the one :-)

This was quite amusing, I like the a2a reference you put in there.

You might want to check it over again for spelling and grammar, there were a few mistakes, and you also missed out question marks several times.

Mint! Looking forward to future instalments.