I really enjoyed this story. It was really sexy. Tatsuki is my favorite female in Bleach. I thought the pseudo religious experience was a nice and interesting touch. I also like that Tatsuki didn't fall for Urahara. She can do better. Though I like ol' Hat and Clogs.

Not bad, in fact shelter, could you please pm me when you have a chance? I would appreciate it.

BTW, you did not fail, in fact, I like what you've done.

I've always sort of liked to think that Tatsuki might become a Substitute Shinigami like Ichigo, so I'm glad to see another fic writer who takes that angle.

The angle of Urahura as a dirty old man who lusts after her is certainly a new angle, but one that he does seem suited for. Now that I think about it, even in canon he sometimes looks and acts like he might offer you candy if you get in his van. I also love Tatsuki's revenge, and I love how both things mirror the Ichigo-Tatsuki relationship, which I believe is perhaps the most criminally underexplored relationship in Bleach in both a romantic and friendship sense.
I very much enjoyed this fic, especially since good quality Tatsuki fics seem unfortunately few and far between. Thanks for this!