That was a very heart warming story. However, Su is a princess so it really doesn't make any sense for her to be starving in a foreign country. Also I think it would have been cool to end the story with Keitaro getting hit into the stratosphere

mwhhaaha mwhahaha mwhahahaahha such an evil ending mwhahahahah mwwhahahahahahah

SHIBBY! this was awesome, loved the end where they're takin' off his pants...
lol this rox my sox

excelent!
Some parts of this fic are very touching.
Keep writing

Excellente! This was great! Me like it! oh by the way, isn't Clarice that Goddess of the Future, Skuld from Oh My Goddess?
I really liked the scene with Su being on the street, it touched me. And the ending, hilarous! Keep writing.

Your story was awesome... i really enjoyed it. I hope you keep writing.

Hehe, brilliantly written peice. I especially like the ending.

WAFFY but good. I just got around to reading this. It is appropriate for this time of year. Thanks for writing.

WAFFY but good. I just got around to reading this. It is appropriate for this time of year. Thanks for writing.

AN EXCEPTIONAL PIECE OF FANFIC. A REAL GENUINE YET FAMILIAR WORK. A CAN HONESTLY CALL THIS PIECE AN ENJOYABLE TEAR JERKER. APPLAUSE TO THE AUTHOR!o

Nice story, I'm sure it'll end in him getting launched. who knows; but they're up to something.

interesting twist on Skuld...eherm...Clarice. Hilarious ending. I actually thought of doing something like this myself, only much much grimmer. Seeing your wokr though, i believe this is better than mine.

nice one

Heh. I'll admit I felt VERY fearful when I first started reading this fic; crossovers like this often turn out horribly. But I was surprised at how well you pulled it off; this fic was well-written, retaining the personality of the anime while using the story of the film. I loved the use of Skuld-err, Clarice, and laughed out loud at the "hammering out the bugs" reference.

And I found myself humming "Auld Lang Syne" by the end. You're an excellent writer. _

beautiful...*sniff* I find myself smiling over and over again when I read the story...cliche, but nicely done.