ITS BEEN MORE THAN A YEAR !

it kills me howw it's ALWAYS THE GOOD, INTERESTING, DIFF. STORIES that aree NEVER FINISHED ! how could you abandon this story ? that hurts my FanFic. heart ! (LOLS D]

the ending was terrible!p.s. only if u write more chapters!

I love this story! I love suspenseful stories and I LOVE Nick and Macy. I can't wait for more and really hope you update soon!

*gasp* Can this be right? I didn't...review? Oh no, I swore I did! I seriously thought I reviewed this different, and awesome story! I guess not.
Well, here's my review... CREEPY! I'm already getting freaked out, by the bus breaking down and Nick and Macy going to that creepy house. Oh come on, if you hear an eerie creak from the front door, RUN! Don't go in! Especially with just the two of you! The more, the merrier! Grab Kevin, Joe and Stella!
This is awesome, and if you don't update this story, I will be extremely sad! Amazing, just amazing, amazing, amazing, amazing! Nick/Macy is definately cute, even though I love Kevin/Macy more. I cannot wait for more!

...I am speechless.

This was VERY descrpitive. I could see everything happening in my head like it's a movie on Scifi(Syfy). Macy is so freaking out on the inside, but too scared and tired to show it. I'm sensing a little Nick/Macy relationship. Maybe not romantic wise, but I have feeling they'll be friends near the end...if you continue this that is. You are going to continue this aren't you?)

Yes please continue!

This is so amazing 8D.

I love everything about it.

Sorry my reviews are so short!

Pressed for time what with being grounded from the internet and all.

OH COOL. I love your narration in this story. Can't wait for the next update!

:O I'm soo excited that someone is doing a JONAS adventure/mystery story! Please continue? And thankyou for your comment on Twitter It made me smile !

oh shit, whats gunna happen? haha loved the beginning-the cliche on the cliche somehow makes an un-cliche intro (if that makes sense). I was expecting a Nick centric story with no possible pairing. Surprisingly, I was ok with that. But then Macy shows up and its just the icing on the cake. Again, like your previous fics, you manage to stay true to the characters despite the familiar atmosphere. You give detail without overly doing it, giving just the need to know basics. And I can always count on your characterization to bring the story to life. Can't wait for more.

This is lovely as always. It's so descriptive and vivid!

The style this is written is great, you pulled it off amazingly. I loved how the 'narrator' is laying out everything in a round about way.

So, I'm all proud of myself for reading something that wasn't Kevin/Macy and am enjoying this Nick piece and then, poof, there be Macy. I was kinda delighted, I must admit.

Also, I was barely halfway through and I tots gasped and yelled "Time Warp"! I had to check the reviews...glad to see I wasn't the only one who thought Rocky Horror.

This best be continued! ;D (We always look forward to your updates)

Yes continue

Nice. But make it a Nick/Macy PLEASE! Mystery and romance together...Beautiful. Update when you can!

I can't wait for the next chapter! Update Soon!

Your writing is very storyteller-ish, it's amazing. Every story you write has me hooked from the first line. I don't know why, but this story made me think of Rocky Horror Picture Show. I'm not sure how you're planning to continue this, but I know it'll be good. I hope you continue!)

For sure continue!

THe suspense is awesome!

And I really wanna know whats up with Macy
Cant wait for more!

Love,

Lori