 Asakure 1/11/08 . chapter 9kill them so _ wa
oh just to end this 2 years later] u can make something "3 years later haruka find the jornal and write what happened and blablabla the end waa i'm sad now.. i was waiting for read this story, but that's ok |
 shinta arctic assasin 12/4/05 . chapter 8hihi haru-chan,
sorry i haven't read this story untill now. i've read like almost all of your fics. i guess i didn't bother to look in anyones profile for other fics. anyway, just wanted to say, your fic is great and i hope u continue it. if u ever wanna talk my screen names BlazinSakura3. bye |
 Nuben290 12/4/05 . chapter 8This is very soon |
 Jenn 6/12/05 . chapter 8 Aw! _ That was so adorable!
I loved it whenever Michi wrote in Ruka's journal and Ruka's responses were priceless! "Damn you Michiru! I...have...to...hide...journal." D
And lucky, lucky Ruka... what a great birthday present! D |
 Leo Sky 7/5/04 . chapter 8i think u already ended it since u haven't updated in a while, lol. okay, i better go i'm starting 2 have a bad giggle attack. |
 DandelionKing 7/12/03 . chapter 8lol, well it was good the second time around as well _ ugh, i just wish that i could dress the way i wanted too... i get to somewhat, but my mother is always bugging me... i am out trying to find a job and she insists that i buy a dress shirt and pants... so i go to the guys department and i find a nice dress shirt and she dosn't let me get it, she drags me to the girls section... at least i can wear a cool vest over the darned thing. still feminine, but it looks cooler now, you would figure that being 19 would give me complete say of what i wear... ah, the joys of being me *grumble grumble* lol, actually, i love my mom to death, but she is trying to be in denial of who i am... lol anyway, cool fic *again* _ -amiko kun |
 DandelionKing 7/12/03 . chapter 4LOL i just realized that i have read this fic already. oh well, i plan on reading it again _ i read hundreds of fics so i often forget hee hee *sweat drop* ok, well toodles! -amiko kun |
 DandelionKing 7/12/03 . chapter 2so far, i love it _ a journal of ruka's and she deals with depression./ i can sympathize _ *sigh* anyway, good luck with your other chapters, although you have prob already finished this P lol anyway, toodles! -amiko kun |
 Alina 5/26/03 . chapter 8 Jen,
U want reviews here it is. U need to put more details in your journal entries of Haruka and Michiru. AND if your gonna end Haruka's Journal, then write one of Michiru. I understand that Haruka doesnt usually express herself a lot. BUT Michiru does, and if you do decide to write Michiru's Journal, you must put in a lot of details. Like Explain the scenery. Her feelings, Her thoughts on what she thinks of the day and of herself and of Ruka. Its the best thing that i can tell you. Explain her dreams and her love for Ruka. The same goes for Haruka too. Lol. Hopefully u can understand what i am saying. Details are always important in a story and in a journal. And in the Journal, its the place were you keep your deepest darkest secrets too, that you dont want anyone else to know about or to find out about or were u just write your thoughts and feelings down. SO thats all u have to do. It sounds hard, but take your time, and it will get accomplished. I hope this works out for you for the best. Have a good day.
Sincerely,
Alina |
 sweet flames of vipers 1/22/03 . chapter 8this is a great writting perspective, and a bi bit, but is Haruka have a psycological dieses, b/ c\some of the symtoms r there |
 Battle Axe Warrior 12/7/02 . chapter 7Dammit! What has Michi got for Ruka? Write more, PLEASE! |
 Neptunes Tears 8/12/02 . chapter 7I like this a lot. Please review soon! |
 Jo Anna 4/16/02 . chapter 7 THIS IS GOOD! Finish it! Finish it! I think it's so cute how Michi puts the little letters in her journal. I love the litle things that Haruka says about it too! I think this is SO cute. But, of course, Michi and Ruka are cute! |
 Michi-Chan 3/29/02 . chapter 7 come on you must add more to get to her bday i wanna know what ive got for ya hurry please love,
UR Michi-Chan |
 Seravy 2/22/02 . chapter 7 This is sooooo cute! H&M are somewhat OOC but it provides an entirely different atmosphere and mood. Though it's only Haruka writing (with michiru's occassional inputs), their relationship's development is reallt well written! I can't wait to see what Michiru has planned for Haruka! |