I loved the reference to "The Book Of Shadows". Charmed was one of my favorite TV shows.

hm, if i' had a power, i think maybe i'd like earth or air.

wow! lauren is a psycho!
meanwhile, i loved watching bella own her power, all the while realizing she might be fire too. ack! so exciting :)

this is such a fascinating story. awesome world building!

oh, man...i feel so bad for bella. edward is treating her so badly, and it's hard to get a read on him. at this point i worry that when they get together it will be uncontrollable, like it's only a result of the imprinting. and lauren's just awful!

oh, edward. unsure of how to handle your feelings? bella's diss cracked me up. edward deserved it!

I don't know how u r going to finish this in 5 more chapters. Can't wait to read more.

I'm still trying to figure out Mrs Crowley's deal here. What is her problem.

I'm really enjoying reading this.

Very interesting lesson from Edwards grandmother.

I absolutely loved this story. I loved the witchcraft elements to it. Great story.

I love how they r developing trust in each other.

I loved that Edward came to Bella's rescue.

Honestly I want to read fan fiction about "Elemental" I never want this story to end! (And I've read it half a dozen times!)

I like the way u had Bella standing up to Edward's Grandfather.