Absolutely loved it. It was perfect the whole way through, great job.

Wow that was a really good story! I didn't see that one coming I thought Draco was good. You should continue it!

CONTINUE THIS STORY PLEASE!

i loved it you should deffinatly continue with it

WOW.

O.o That's it? It was amazing! And then it just...ended
Will you continue it?

that was probably the GREATEST thing I have ever read. major kudos for that beauty. you totally should've posted it sooner-it's genius. mwhahaha...i definetly like this version better than the actual battle-that's for sure xD great work

i swear i made an account jstt to review this storyy
hehe well not really, but i thought it was amazing!
i loved it, you must must must make another chapterr
you cant leave us like this.

Great story. Really needs another chapter though.

Wow, this was... epic. So dark, but so well done. Wow. I did NOT see that coming!
But I guess that can be expected from you, with Period and all. I didn't even know you were the author or this until your AN at the end.
Brilliant writing, well done!

that was realy good.

you should do a second part to this.

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wow, this was great!

I love this story. I hope you add more to it.

please please PLEASE post another chapter! You cant leave it like this!

I liked it...though from what I gathered he wants to either capture her or make him his forever.