 Lady Cheshire 2009-07-28 . chapter 1Nice! Great background with the heat, I have to say. It makes the actions and words of the characters almost tangible. You've done a great job projecting these two characters in the future- Akihiko is a wishful, nostalgic gaurdian who has gracefully accepted his role but hitches on the small things (as though taking it step by step) and Ken's still following in his shadow even though he's branched out and starting to become his own person. I love it! Sorry to ramble; it's just so good! |