That was really good! I felt it was a scene straight from the movie

very nice. it was romantic and it made me smile. congrats!

This is really cute! I just watched 27D (for only the second time!) last night, and this part of the movie made me laugh. Your version is really cute, and I can see it working, kinda.

Nice job!

aww really sweet

loved it ;]

I loved it! I also think you need to add more of it!

aw!

oh. my. god. ive never read such an amazing fic before. this is my first 27dresses fic (which btw; i lovelovelove james marsden. he makes me melt :) ) AH! you did this so well!

Aw, adorable! I love this movie, and this is a really cute re-write of this scene. Nice job!

Wow! I'm getting goosebumps...! That was soo so so cute! Damn i wished that actually happened in the movie...3

I know the feeling! I just never re-write scenes but replay them in my head:P I like it, it's cute:D

very cute, and in character. loved it!(I too have an obsession with re writing scenes(though most don't make it out of my head)haha. thanks for putting it up!

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It's been a while since I watched this movie but I think you wrote it better! I wished this had happened at that moment, not at the end of the movie. :) You wrote some parts the same but the differences were, to be honest, better than in the movie!

Awesome work, Pyro! :)

AW. SO cute.

Great story, Ada-la. And amazingly, I watched this movie. Twice. Was a prtty good movie. And Micha from Heroes was in it. Here's a typo. So what if I they're not excessively flattering. Just pointing it out, sorry.

Aw! I love this movie - and seriously, this was better than the real scene. That's expected from you, though. I loved the way he "read her" and this line: "I get it. You want the whole she-bang. You want the forever-and-evers and the perfect guy. (The one.) You want a marriage." He plopped down across from her. "What I don't get is...why in the hell are you focusing on everyone else's Kodak moment? How do you expect to find Mr. Right if you're too busy making sure everyone else is happy?" It was just so *sigh* perfect!

OKay, I'll stop pestering you with PM's and reviews now (they must be annoying). (;