 kaleidoscope.colours 2009-11-28 . chapter 1Wow! That was wonderful! Something completely different and original, I've never read anything like it. Colin/Harry is a ship I never actually considered, but it was written so well! I felt Harry's pain at having to do something Hermione set up (such a Hermione thing to do, using Harry to promote bi-sexuality and make the world a better place). I also loved the Hannah/Neville in this, how he took her hand and comforted her when the woman said she wasn't good enough, I felt such anguish for poor Hannah! :(
All in all, amazing. I thoroughly enjoyed it. |
 ChaosChild92 2009-10-24 . chapter 1That was possibly the most adorable thing ever put to...well...a computer screen.
I've never seen Colin written in a couple with anybody (except Ginny, and that was only mentioned because they both got killed because of it. By Percy Weasley no less...upon reflection that was a very strange fic).
Anyway, despite my inexperience in the whole realm of Colin-ness and the fact that I kept getting horribly confused and wondering what on earth Colin Morgan thought he was doing in a Harry Potter fic, I really loved this. :D
Much love. |
 Anna 2009-10-01 . chapter 1 OHMAHGAWD! Collin had never appealed to me before but HOLY CRUD! I've been turned into a fangirl now <3 |
 StoryTagger 2009-09-21 . chapter 1That was very nice...and hm, wonder who Luna ended up with or would she be one of those "aunt" figures...seriously, I have a two of those. Two aunts from somewhere in my family, both are beautiful but not with anyone. One works at a daycare center and that is her life. The other...is actually kind of...eccentric like Luna...both are totally awesome though. |
 hopelessidealist 2009-09-15 . chapter 1Well Tobi you've done it again. I don't know how you think up of these pairings, but I LOVE 'EM! I don't usually shreik but this ficlet had me squeling in delight. Aw! |
 Bam4Me 2009-09-10 . chapter 1I love how you made Dennis make them kiss. That was so cute and sweet. It made me think too. Nothing in particular, it just made me think. |
 May Eve 2009-09-01 . chapter 1Oh my goodness, I'd never even considered this pairing, bad me, but now I love it! You wrote this so incredibly well! Absolutely fantastic! ^^
(PS. Though I do wish you amazing authors would quit giving me all these new pairings to adore. It's getting really difficult to narrow searches. -pouts-) |
 DanceswithHippogriffs 2009-08-28 . chapter 1aww!! i adore harry/colin, and this was really well-written. |
 XxSarahCullenxX 2009-08-09 . chapter 1I really enjoyed this story! It was really nicely done, of course cute too!
Sarah |
 JDL45 2009-08-05 . chapter 1Yes. And I would say that Hermione ought to expect that it will be a cold day years from now before Harry or any of his friends forgive her.
Hermione really doesn't have much respect for people's free will. I would imagine that even in the wizarding world, there can't be an unlimited ability for someone to just enter someone else into a magically binding contract, GoF notwithstanding. Whatever it was that made Hermione able to do this is something I would expect to have permanently canceled by Harry. |
 YeahYouWannaKnowMyName 2009-08-04 . chapter 1AWW!! Its So Cute! Me Love!
YYWKMN. |
 AngelicVampiress 2009-07-28 . chapter 1Brilliant
I would love to see people reacting to the pictures. I can see several / a lot of people getting turned on and not only envying Luna/Hannah/Colin for touching Harry but the reverse as well.
I think the pics must be smokin' :) |
 beware-of-weeping-angels 2009-07-28 . chapter 1Oh, that's so cute! And... and... Colin! I loved it, great job! |
 supergirl3684 2009-07-27 . chapter 1that was too great!! I've never really liked Harry/Colin...till now! |
 Sandshrew777 2009-07-26 . chapter 1I'm going to make myself cut this one short, I swear, because if I get to rambling I'll never shut up. :P And I'm nervous about my review so let me say I favorited this because I loved it. :)
Anyway, I love this pairing to death - and the Colin in my head loves what you did to describe him, thank you, he's very appreciative :P - and you've done it justice here. I really appreciate the premise of the story and the choice to keep it a little fiercer, a little darker than it perhaps could have been. You tempered it with the lightness of Colin's attitude and Harry's doting, which were lovingly done.
Um...I never know how to word this, but if you'd like constructive criticism, please read the next paragraph. If not, skip right on past! :)
The only thing about this that made me wriggle my nose was the emotional stakes. It seemed like everyone was moving from one extreme to another, from one vehement declaration of anger or defense or puppy love or friendship. I loved each of those moments, separately. You pulled them off with real finesse. I'm just not sure they work all together, all one after the other. If they were interrupted with a bit more description of the area and equipment, body language...something fact-based and straightforward - then I think you would have it just right.
But anyway - I love your Hannah! She's got real flavor. I love that you tapped into Harry's tenderness and Colin was just right. He's a real softie and you captured that beautifully. (I wanted MORE of that massage scene, though... :P) And it was nice to see you work with Hermione's more negative side, even if I think Harry was exaggerating a bit about hating her. That's totally within Hermione's range as a character though - she tends to look over things sometimes. :)
Thank you for a lovely read. Your Colin made my day, really, he did. And Hannah was lovely and Harry's ferociousness was great too.
Excellent work.
Keep writing! |