WOW! That was great

i liked it... i think maybe Bella should be a little more... bothered.. after all she has a hole in her chest.. but its good

Very beautiful story!

Wow - just wow. This was an amazing, beautiful story! I loved the fact that they actually had to work things out, and that they *did* work them out.

I really enjoyed this story! Even though a little lemon would have been nice, I thought that the ending in Bella's bedroom was a beautiful moment. I loved Charlie in this story with all of his threats against Edward. Especially when he encouraged Bella to kick Edward in the balls or to key his car, haha!

I love your version.

I'm so excited! I HATED the way Edward and Bella got back together in New Moon! Can't wait to here from Edward!

Really hate that Edward left Bella in NM! :[ I know that Edward thought that he was keeping Bella safe, but he should have talked to her first.

The agony that they are both feeling now is heartbreaking.

That was great! I loved the pine cone throwing, though something bigger would have felt a bit more satisfying. :)

You did a great job of showing us another viable plot line. I like feisty Bella! Love your writing and the ending did feel right.

Thank you!

loved the ending

Short sweet and to the point. i liked it a lot! Especially throwing pine cones.

this story was so awesome to read! :D you're really up with the awesome work- especially for The Small Print

Fabulous story! I am so glad she didn't just fall into his arms... she made him work for it. If she ever wants him to take her seriously she had to stand up for herself.

aw! i love it! it was really good!

Wow, I can't believe he went to talk to him. That's great! Beautiful scene between father and daughter! "Now multiply that by more than four, and you'll be closer to the number of years I've been alone. I'm not telling you that to lessen what you feel - I'm telling you so that you can understand how precious and rare you are. I've searched for you for so long, but I had no idea that when I finally found you how much you would come to mean to me. Or what I would be willing to do to keep you safe. I don't think I really understood love before you. You are literally part of me. I would rip myself apart in a second if it meant saving you. I would rip us apart - for you."" That was just so beautiful and touching. I love it. That was amazing! Loved this story!