I like this! It has a nice fun title, an interesting concept of Lavi keeping his innocence, psychologically tormenting our poor little bunny friend and well LUCKY as main pairing. I love.

I love it! I can't wait to see what you do~

and so the song choice - and a lovely choice it was - makes sense.
Sweet.
I like how you mesh the chapters; much longer, more to read.

I can't help but wonder if youre going to turn lavi into something completely new. (Human x dragon + armor. Or something. I uses matrixing too often, sorry if none of this makes sense.)

I like the green fire; makes me think of Maleficent, but you know, 50x better.
... And now, Lavi as a dragon in a gown is dominating my thoughts. completely and utterly your fault.

Yay! Another chapter! ^_^ And I must say you surprised me with this one. I was thinking what is going to happen next but I didn't expect this, great! And such a long one :)
I see Lavi is still into lenalee...hehe...I am so curious how is he going to switch to Tyki later *grins*
I love the plot and I really like in this chapter the tension between Lavi and Tyki. You did the great description so I had really clear picture in my mind of what was happening.
Ah yes, the part when Tyki asks Rode how old lavi is and she answers - “Too young for anything you might want to do.”.LOL...that was so funny :)
Please continue with the great work :)

Update!! Sorry for the late review anyway great writing style, fluent flow of words, you're keeping them IC and the interaction between all of the characters are written well.
Luv all your fics, keep up the good work and hope you'll be able to update soon.

UPDATE!! Did I just speed up the update to this year instead of next year? You can't just leave readers hangin giwth this mystery.

Ok, intersting title (Lavi doesn't breath fire, he spits it)lol.

I've read these two chapters and I'm confused as hell but I like the story.

ah, sorry sorry sorry, i'm late again!! >_<

anyway this chapter...WOW!! i can't find words to describe it!!

i like the part in the library, expacially when Lavi was looking the book and he spoke in different languages. i totolly see him doing it! and Lavi's innocence restoring itself: super-great!! i love your incredibile plotting mind!!

i'll wait for the next!! this fic is too awsome leave it! so, please, don't even think of not-updating it!!

This is really epic, I do hope that you update xD

Well...how to say... Usually I don't like the Lucky pairing. I claim that is the fault of earlier (horrible) fics I came across which sort of traumatized any hope for this pairing. (Maybe it's a little remnant of my old habitual shippings for Naruto too, as I generally prefer to swing with the most canon couples.) Even so, while I may be a loyal Yullen fan I have been...ehm, corrupted, so Poker Pair sort of took second standing.

But I must say, I see this fic have started out exceptional. Your writing style stands out, and it flows well, which is also another plus. You were able to capture the characterizations accurately, something few are able to do. I will follow this story, and eh, who knows. I might even be converted to the Lucky shipping.

~ Fay Ren

I like the length (long chapters make me happy!) and the style of your writing. And the story/plot i something I haven't seen before ...
Update ... whenever you diced to update ... with chapters like these, it should be once every poka-dotted moon or so~

Wow... Dammit, now this is another one of yer fics i'm hooked on. xD
WHY must ya come up with such great plot-lines all the time? -sigh-

Well, first of all...i'm a bit confused as ta why the Crow are after him/were after Bookman. If it's s'posed ta be obvious, my apologies...it's 8:43am, an' i haven't slept. So, my brain's a big mushy...what's left of it... xD
I also haven't read the manga since April, apart from the newest update...maybe i'd undterstand better if i refreshed myself? In any case, i'm sorry fer the trouble.

Wow...i really wasn't expectin' tha'. Lavi givin' up his Innocence, i mean. In fact, tha' whole scene came as a shock. A pleasin' one, might i add, however.

I REALLY can't wait ta see what happens next. What will Lavi...erm, Bookman do, now tha' he's no longer an' Exorcist? Is he goin' ta keep his identity, or create a new one? Stay with Tyki, or leave an' be reunited? I got so many questions runnin' through my head after readin' this. I can't wait ta see how it all plays out. ^^

~Tofu

I like this. <3
It's built up nicely and reasonable.

The way Lavi decided to go with Tyki because he thought he'd be followed - thanks to Tyki - for example. You gave reason to why it ended up the way it was.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter. (:

so epic! can't wait for the next chapter!!