 talkstoangels77 2009-09-23 . chapter 3Can I ask? Is Allen going to take on Jack's role by any chance? I don't know why, but it seems like he'd fit... |
 talkstoangels77 2009-09-23 . chapter 1You know, he never did take her to Barcelona, did he? |
 Utuu 2009-09-17 . chapter 3Oh man, ohman, I don't believe I forgot to review this! I'm sorry! It's an awesome chapter, as always, hilarious and makes me want to read more! I hope the next chapter is coming soon!
Utuu |
 effervesence 2009-08-21 . chapter 3ok, lemme make 1 thing crystal clear- van has just GOT to be the third passenger...and i'm not taking no for an answer. he is the third passenger. period.
ok, fine fine-- *clears throat*
oh please, please, please please let van be the third passenger. oh please please, i beg of u!
ya, so i just gotto tell u- dryden is nothing short of being absolutely hilarious, he is just amazing and a hypocrite and is eccentricity at its best, which i just happen to be a fan of.
loved the chapter and why do i have a feeling that the knight we are soon to meet is going to be none other than our infamous allen schezar??
i don't know. i guess i'll just have to wait and watch.
pls update soon...don't make me a grovel for this too, my throat is already sore from previous grovellings.
and i finally got to read this chapter. i read it bits and pieces since my laptop was under the influence of my pest of a brother...heh!! |
 Morroki 2009-08-20 . chapter 3OO oo o oo oo so interesting! update soon, im looking forward to it! ^^ |
 Lil' Dinky 2009-08-20 . chapter 3Hm, best restaurant in the universe, eh? That wouldn't be the one a few Hitch Hiker's ventured into? ^_^ I was just waiting for Dryden to tell Van not to forget his towel... but then, I'm always one for mixing and matching. Besides, the good Dr. and HHG always seemed to fit so well together.
But I digress. Lovely chapter! Van is so CUTE when he's confused! And so typically foot-in-mouth, too. No wonder Dryden invited him along. |
 ChiKa YuMe 2009-08-19 . chapter 3Wah!! Sowwie for teh late review ^^; Bros did stuff to teh compy that pops wasn't particularily happy about..
ANYWAYS!!
Mwah hahahahahahahaha!! Yes, Vanny, FEEL DISCOMFORT!! >DD
NYAH HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
Uu fuu fuu~
Teh fan-girl within me is pleased >3
LMFAO xDD
HAH!! DRYDEN'S AN ALIEN!! O.O
..Err.. I mean, non-human xDD
Somehow I'm not surprised O.o Ah knew der was somethin with teh crazy liddo weirdo xDD
Aww!! How cute!! xDD I can TOTALLY imagine liddo kiddy Vanny strikin up a conversation with Santy Claus!
..Or pointing a sword to his throat, demanding he tell him jus what the fudge he was doin breakin into his house.
It's a possibility >.>
HAH!! SUDOKU ON MARS!! O.O
I'd like to see dat xDD
Yes, Vanny!! COME!! >DD
COME AND BE WITH 'TOMI!! >33
KYAH HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!
DD:
Oh feck.
Teh knight duude is Allen, isn't it?
ZOMG IS HE TEH FOURTH PASSENGER?!?!? DD:
Snap.
Snap Crackle.
Snap Crackle Pop.
I swear, if he touches 'Tomi, I WILL GO APE CRAP ON HIS ARSE!!
And so will Vanny.
ESPECIALLY Vanny.
Like, monkey smackdown.
Tag team.
Me and Vanny vs. Allen and his hair
Though I can't deny dat it'll make things more.. Interesting.. :P
Maybe dat'll be enough to snap some sense into Van >3
Fufufufufufufufufufufu ^3^
Can't wait!! :3
EEP!! As usual, twas an absolutely luffly chappy!! ^.^
Can't wait for more! :D
UPDATE SOON!! :3
Chika out |
 Storms-winter 2009-08-18 . chapter 3Awesome, so Van is going to join them and travel space :)
I'm especially enjoying how he's finally taking a notice to Hitomi, and it was quite interesting to learn that Dryden has two hearts. Was that in the original show or did you add that in?
Can't wait to see more
Storm |
 kimmi0490 2009-08-15 . chapter 3Good Chapter, keep it up. :D |
 thepinkmartini 2009-08-14 . chapter 3i wonder who's the fourth passenger. dryden is awesome and i love the paris hilton allusions. |
 Rockin Sockin Robot 2009-08-14 . chapter 3Oops, I don't think I reviewed Chapter 2 -- sorry!! Okay, well let me first say that I definitely did NOT expect Dryden to be an alien, but he's really in character and I love the way you've written him out so far. I also like that Hitomi is pretty self-sufficient, while she's got a very cute sort of crush on Van. :)
This chapter was nice and detailed without being overwhelming with all the information. The previous chapters were pretty good about this as well, but more so with Chapter 3 because it proceeds from simply introducing this new reality of martians and so on, to a closer look at what actually happens in this world. Like Dryden's two hearts, and the random restaurants in other galaxies that have really good Japanese food. :p
I can't wait to see what Allen is like in the next one. Also -- bad puns are awesome. The worse the pun, the better, I think. :) Thanks for the update! |
 Tanwen Whitefire 2009-08-14 . chapter 3So we'll end up with van hitomi and allen doing their triangle thing, and dryden laughing his keister off? Sounds interesting. :)
For a moment, you made me think of the restaurant at the end of the universe with all that restaurant talk. But, I look forward to the next chapter. |
 Jav-chan 2009-08-14 . chapter 3I hope Dryden gets to be more condescending. ^^
I swear this fic started my Who obsession...if it can be called that. so, does Dryden fiddle with his spectacles?
Does Hitomi wear a dress that forces Van to take a cold shower?
Does Van fall onto Hitomi's breasts? You know in the Tardis?
And the most important one of all:
WHO DOES ALLEN HIT ON!
I am going to assume your client will continue to wander into Egypt?
Absolute love and you are doing an excellant job in making Dryden doctor-ish. ^^ I'm am SO looking forward to the next chapter. |
 chibimimi 2009-08-06 . chapter 2Tardis?I wonder what are they upto.The Sherlock Holmes part my brain is failing to make any future prediction.
The alien thing was funny,Dryden does look like an alien sometimes:D
I didn't expect Dryden to blurt out that Hitomi likes Van.Poor Tomi.But I guess Van will hardly notice anything.This story is really getting interesting, waiting for your next chapter,please update soon. |
 ChiKa YuMe 2009-08-06 . chapter 2O.O
ZOMGWTFUXDRYDENAND'TOMICANREADVANNY'SMIND O_O
Duude, that's crazy xDD
BUT HOW IS IT EBEN POSSIBLE?? O.o
Uwaah!! Mind boggling =.=
:DD
YOOSH!!
Kyah kyah KYAAH!! VANNY IS STARTIN TO NOTICE 'TOMI MORE!! :DD
EEP!!
That is, if his reaction to that particularn lewd thought about 'Tomi and Dryden (DD: ZOMGWFTUXMYEYES!!
THEY BUURN!! DDx) is anything! ;3
-squeals-
Nyah hahahahahahahahahahahahaha!!
Oh joy! :3
Though he's still pretty dense =.="
GAH!!
It's like COME ON!! -shakes Vanny- SERIOUSLY!! YEW'D THINK THAT WITH ALL TEH "HINTS" DRYDEN'S BEEN DROPPIN, HE WOULD'VE AT LEAST GUESSED *SOMETHING*!!
ANYTHING!!
Jeebus!!
Speaking of these "hints", I rather like Dryden :3
He makes things so much more interesting!! xDD
Ah! I wonder what's gonna happen nao dat Vanny has discovered their secret DD:
It could be anythin, I tells ya!!
ANYTHIN!! DDx
AWAAH!!
Ah! But it probably won't be anythin bad as long as 'Tomi has anythin to do with it! >:3
Fufufufufufuu ^3^
Well I reckon that's enough for today -stretches-
I can't wait to see what you come up with next chappy!! xDD
UPDATE SOON!! :3
Chika out |
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