Goosebumps and a crying heart; heart strings pulled, tearing, playing with pain and love and something that felt distant and cold. Clammy fingers running down cold metal, cause it hurts, hurts so much, and the metal would cut at the pulling strings and that pain would go away. Disappear. He could make it disappear.

Denial, hurt, a want to be saved and freed from binging chains of dark and lust; inrefutable evil, so evil, so cold. A want to be saved.

And then relief, light and air and movement, a heart beating; what a familiar sound that was, and warmth, so much warmth and there was a begging need to touch that warmth, feel it with his whole hand, grab it, make sure it was real.

Oh, it was real.

- Copyright Amanda I. 2009. All rights reserved.


XD

Geez, i'm talking like i'm some kind of depressed teen or something (Teen, yes. Depresseed, not in the least). I often write a little something to show how i feel about a fic. So there's my writing.

Okay, enough with that ...

Awesome one-shot, ya'll! Yeah, it was pulling a lot of heart strings. That measn it's really good XD

Keep writing!

Yeps.

Regards,
Keuraki-SoraXRiku

Wow. This is just...really poetic and beautiful. I absolutely loved it. This is incredible work and you should be very proud.

Aw. Wowie. This was awesome.
It made me want to play KH2 al over again.
-sniffle-
Flamingo feathers for you! :D

WOW. This was really, really awesome. It was so dark I was sure someone would die at the end, but then it had a happy ending. Nice. ;)

That was quite lovely.
I enjoyed this one bunches -- keep writing forever and ever.
<3<3<3

Oh my gosh! I don't think they've made a word that describes how amazingly good that story was! It was beautifully written, well spun, just all around entertaining. I thoughrly enjoyed this story! Good job. :D

Aw! Cute!

I are so confused >.<

I'm too lazy to sign in.

I love the story nevertheless.
You're awesome dahlin.