This was amazing! I love Peter, he's my favorite character in the whole book. You wrote his POV very nicely! Great job! :)

that was really good. i agree with you; i wish josie and peter had been together, and i felt horrible for peter. he was my favorite character.

I think it's really good overall. I like how you made it look like Josie was supposed to shoot Peter. But the only thing I'm confused about is this. If Peter didn't want Matt dead, why did he shoot him in the head? He could've let him live and Josie would be happy with him alive. But it's still really good. Any other chapters coming up?

it is really good

it is such a sad story though

but a fantastic book

a goog fan fic though

:)

That's a great insight on Peter!

Aw. I feel so bad for Peter! Great story!

Omg this Is SOo Great! Its soo Sad Too !

I really like that :)

I feel bad for him, too, and this is awesome!