... That was a horrible cliffhanger. And the link to your old chapters don't work... Oh, well. It is lovely, though. ]

This is great and even though it is a revised WIP i wanna read more be it revised or not! However, the link for the original is broken or something...

If its not too great an inconvenience, could you send me the link or maybe a copy of the original via email? I mean, i REALLY wanna see what happens.

Thanks!

wow! this was a great fic! marvelous characterizations and interesting plot! I can't wait to see what else you do with them.

o, just a heads up, the links you posted in chapter 1 and 2 don't work:glomps again, great work, very engaging. Thank you so much for sharing it!

(Yawns and stretches) Huh. Hinterpesting. I look forward to future developments. I'm a sucker for hurt-Goku..

Wow! Update soon! PLEASE!

This is getting really REALLY plot sounds delectable indeed! So,Sanzo and Goku on one side, Hakkai and Gojyo on the .GIVE ME MORE! KEEP WRITING! I'll be waiting!

Unrivaled skills! Marvelous, marvelous! *Sparks of life arises from eyes*

I like, I like! I do hope you'll add another chapter soon, I'm lacking in good fanfiction to read, and I wish to read as much as possible between now and September 2. For, once I have returned to school, I shall have little free time to read fanfic! This is very interesting, but where's the Sanzo-torture? I love him so much, I love to see him hurt _ I'm sadistic, and Hiei can vouch for that!

Impressive! This is really written with the true spirit of the manga. I wish you might pay a little attention to details of the surroundings and people's looks, for the only real description was of the old temple doors. Surroundings don't have to be over done, but the reader can't see what you see when you write. Also, it may just be me, but Hakkai's dark mood seems to be a bit over the edge. Though Gojyo probably tell him to burn his faux smiles with the rest of the youkai on the mountain, it seems to me that Hakkai would still try to hide his guilt complex (now he thinks he's contributed greatly to this) with a smile when Gojyo talked to him, once again.

Again, a great fic which should definitely be continued!

YAY I want more!

Love this story! For a second I thought Goku was about to die... Hope that Hakkai and Gojyo are alright...

Continue soon, ne? Ganbatte!

Wow... I loved the description of the road at the beginning... Poor Goku... I hope he's alright!

And Gojyo too... *sigh
Why do we love torturing them so much?
I really like this first chapter (well I never read the un-revised version) On to the next!

BY GOD!

Have you no idea how i've been forever waiting for this to finally show up! You evil, evil, writer, have you forgotten how people love this fic! I am so mad but i am grinning at the same time without even knowing why!

ARGGH! You are so bad to us. You should know that there might be people like me, who will utterly refuse to read the original for the sake of this disastrously hard revision process!

Now continue!

Please, of course. And ah.. deeply sorry for the lack of manners that came with this review. It will not happen again#!

Bwahahahaha...

hm. extremely curious, i am!

what happens next?

i wonder!

now don't let me wonder too long, you owe me a good third chapter!

Nya ha ha ha ha.

hi! nice fic!

awwww...just like goku to jump off a cliff for his guardian..

so...any gokuXsanzo to be expected? XD