Oh that's brilliant. Have I said yet that I love this series of one shots? I ABSOLUTELY do and this newest snippet had me giggling and smirking as I read, leaving my roommate to question my sanity ;) Kawaii!

Bribing Jiraiya with Tsunade's underwear... XD!

Daww, so cute. Strange to see Asuma so motivated. I wonder what happened to make him such a lazy bum.

lol, oh asuma. for some reason i imagined a high pitched voice much like konohamaru's. speaking of konohamaru, i wonder who his parents are? but anyway, this is cute, childhood rivalry between the two boys, however one-sided. keep it up! XD

Chibi Asuma is as obnoxius as ever, eh?

Good on you, for making me lol again.

“Dad’s the Hokage,” the five-year-old corrected irritably, “And that means he’s your boss. And that means, I’m your boss’s son, and if you keep acting like an idiot I’ll fire you!”


I laughed so hard. XD
Chibi!Asuma simply rocks and so does your story. ;)

This is brilliant...pure and simple. I LOVE this exploration of what Asuma would have been like as a kid. :D I hope there will be more

Oh, Asuma, you spelunking lil' rascal you...

Whoever knew you could write such a funny fic? Nice going, man.

This story is awesome! I don't a lot of little Asuma fan fics... ah! You just make him soo cute...

that was super cute. :D

Hehehehe, good one. Tokage, the leader of Konoha, is mistaken by a hokage! How dare you, Asuma! =DD
Jiraya was good too. And Asuma was actually nice in the end.

All hail the great 3rd Tokage! \o//o\\o//o\

James

Aw, so sweet. A tokage is a lizard, then? Sarutobi DOES look like one then, quite a lot so. This is very cute-thank you for sharing.

I love you're characterization of Orochimaru, to quote him "I believe this is yours, sensei," I can just hear the disdain in his voice! Keep up the great work!

This is adorable. More please? :)

Ahahaha, awesome!
You are right, little Asuma has much to be explored.
I don't really feel sorry for the Third, though. And I think Jiraya is a very good friend (influence?) for a four year-old... =D

James