I enjoyed reading ... tnx! hope you make more... and hope too that you could make more of Kanae and Hio story...

i like the story, but i was disappointed that so much of the story was told in a recollecting manner. it would have been better if the scenes were actually described, from another perspective than a xxx happened and yyy happened, without the reader witnessing it.

Once again a wonderful story.

I think I loved this line most:

Lory had honestly intended to keep a low profile as the trio travelled to Hizuri's estate. It never occurred to him that being transported in a gold-plated stretch HMMV would attract so much attention.

That's just sooooo Lory!

squeal!

Vodka fulled review
Chapter 1
[He said something about some award]. [It's a trick, a trick I tell you!]. [I bet my scar would make half of the actors lose their lunches]. [How marvelous! If we were nominated, that means that someone else who wanted to be wasn't nominated. Hmmm, I bet that hurt.] This segment really gives me hope in for this story. I just love demon conferences in Kyoko's head. I hope there will be more of them.

Chapter 2
Uuuuuu, someone hates Sho and that someone isn't Reino, Ren or Kyoko. How interesting. Insert wicked smile here

Chapter 3
Kyoko is getting on my nerves. Too much self-depreciation is too much.
Ah, Julie obvious much?
Yes, please let this work out author-san.

Chapter 4
I just realized how similar I am to Lory. I, too, shall enjoy Ren's distress way too much.
That's it, Julie. Make him spill it all out.
Aw, Julie I cannot wait for you to meddle. Okay, meddle has a bit to negative connotation. But, you get what I want.
So, it's Kyoko's mother that is trying to bring down Sho. Why?
Wait, why is she hating both him and Kyoko? Obviously she hasn't heard the one that the enemy of your enemy is your friend.

Chapter 5
Kyoko-oujo-sama. Hihihihi It's so Kyoko.
Is it Sho, Reino or that mystery woman that is smiling in the background?

Chapter 6
So, it wasn't Sho.
If only Sho knew everything. Like the fact that Kyoko is staying with Ren's parents. Just the thought of it is enough to make me erupt into giggles.
So, it is dear Kyoko's mother.

Chapter 7
I hate her. Why does she have to know Lory? Yes, I'm whining.
Uuuuu, an international criminal Saena Siren Mogami. Cannot wait to find out more.
A mouthful of orange juice spiked with vodka just flew out of my mouth.
Saena tried to seduce Kuu? Where do you get these ideas? Because they are brilliant.
Well, finally Sho did something in a fanfiction story that doesn't make me hate him.

Chapter 8
Oh, Lory's going to tell something to Kyoko. I have a feeling we are going to find out who is Kyoko's daddy.
Hyperventilating. Sho is actually willing to work with Ren. I'm so glad I didn't take a sip of drink this time.
He said it. Sho said he needs help.

Chapter 9
I knew it!
Btw, your take on it in your A/N seems perfectly logical to tell you the truth.

Chapter 10
"In their dreams he is often a hero, a general, the president of a country, a millionaire, etc." In Lory's case, why not all?

Chapter 11
Who would have thought Saena would be able to pull something like drug and arms smuggling when she couldn't even successfully sabotage Sho?

Chapter 12
Poor FBI agents.
I really am like Lory. I too would enjoy that tremendously.
Thank God for Ren's perfect timing.

Chapter 13
"You're telling me that the great Tsuruga Ren had deep personal conversations with a man-sized chicken?!" Trust Kanae to put it out bluntly as it is.
Epiphany moments are so fun.
Gotta love the feminists.
Awwwww, Ren owns the feminists for such an outstanding set of circumstances.

Chapter 14
Awww. I cannot bring myself to feel sorry for Sho.

Chapter 15
Reino started a cult?! Oh, my sides!

This review was brought to you by an outburst of courage which was caused by the presence of a liberal amount of vodka in the reviewers system.
Until the next time,
Srylanna.

Even though it's barely touched upon in the anime, it's fairly well known that Kyoko's father has passed away. Since there is no actual proof other than the one bare mention and in all honesty it may have been Saene just getting attention for a child out of marriage, the thought of her father being alive is definitely an interesting idea.

Thank you for reminding me that some people research a little, and honestly think out their story lines before flinging words into their computers. (Unfortunately I'm not one of them lol)

Thank you for an interesting perspective and an amazing plot twist!

Epic.

I think that this was a perfect way to end this story.

I feel sort of bad for Sho, now that he is suddenly acting more mature, but I like the resolution that you are bringing to his and Kyoko's problems.

I can only imagine how shocked everyone watching this would be, especially the people who know him.

I know that it was really serious through this chapter, but I got a surprising kick out of that part at the end where Ren carries Kyoko "through the stunned crowd of agents."

There were so many things that happened in these last few chapters (like Kyoko and Lory finding out about their relationship and Kyoko just admitting in her mind that she loves Ren) and I love it.

Wha... And to think, towards the beginning of this story, when Lory was mentioning how much he cared for Kyoko, I was imagining what it would be like for him to adopt her... This isn't what I had expected, but it's interesting.

Good job, Sho! At least he wasn't ALWAYS a pain.

Seriously, is this woman Kyoko's mother? It kind of seems obvious but I just want to make sure that I'm not getting ahead of myself. Her plans are smart and mean and it's making her interesting.

i totally LOVE this story! it has all my favorite geres in it, comedy, drama, romance ect. it really is amazing ;-)
keep up the excelent work, cant wait to read your next story!