Criticism? NOOOO. Not at all! SHO KYOOT! Adorable; I love it.

Sasuke's childlike innocence is so cute! :)

And -

Yes, Sasuke, you will marry Sakura one day. Don't break your promise D

THAT WAS SO CUTE!

extremely cute. :) I can imagine sasuke like this when he was seven.

n'gaw 3

ah my two fave pairings! great story. itachi is such a perverted teenager. lawl.

This was adorable, and because it was SasuSaku it was the more sweeter! Since you gave no clue, I was in fear of reading any other pair with him, something I dont do and leave me so irked, so it was a relief. heh. About the other pair, ItaKon (would that be it?) I actually am fine with the idea. If ItaSaku cant be, then Konan would be a great pick. I really dont see ItaIno happening, really dont, although in this storie it wouldnt be actually possible. Well, Im ranting. Just saying I liked it a lot!

meh i thought that was good but the ItachiXKonan thing creeped me out!

Cute! :D