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Amethyst Ocean
2009-10-11 . chapter 1
AH! This was amazing!

This is EXACTLY what I was thinking when I watched this episode! I thought about the whole "Dude Code" and how Danny was being a hypocrite with Danny and no one ever bothered to point that out.

THANK YOU.

Thank you for this awesome masterpiece of total wicked awesomeness. This was excellent!
opiumsong
2009-08-02 . chapter 1
Wow, this is really good. I love Tucker's point of view. This one is a keeper. You are really good writer.

OS
:)
Jae B
2009-07-30 . chapter 1
I know I'm supposed to supposed to lend advice, but I've none to give. Your oneshot of Tucker's POV is the best interpretation of FWD I've read...ever. It's great to use an objective POV AND Tucker. He should be included more often. Awesome job.

-Jae-
DannySamLover20
2009-07-26 . chapter 1
this is good!! that sounds like tucker!
Legendary Chimera
2009-07-25 . chapter 1
I love how you write Tucker. In this line,"Sure enough, after another roar of jets, we heard some shouting that sounded like Valerie." we heard someone shouting would probably make more sense but that's just me. I loved the second line, pure gold right there.
SuperHeroes Fanatic
2009-07-25 . chapter 1
Wow, another great take on the subject of Danny and Valeries short-lived relationship! I gotta say I really liked this one because you see through Tucker's eyes in this one, and to him everything is so clear, yet Danny and Sam can't figure it out cause they're afraid. I really enjoyed Tuck's little flashback from 4th grade. It's kinda funny how I can actually see that happening back then! =D
Also, I don't remember if I said it in my last review, but the way you describe and show Sam's emotions in this story and the His and Hers fic, it makes me feel...like...like giving her a hug too, you know. And the way Tuck also takes care of her, it's all beautiful. I love your fics! You're always able to make me feel like I'm in the character's shoes, not many can do that. You are truly One Of A Kind! =D
wigonas
2009-07-25 . chapter 1
Oh! This is an unexpected pleasure! Much faster than I thought!
Yeah, Tucker is right. From his perspective (and ours), both Danny and Sam are hopelessly clueless.
And now I officially love Tucker, courtesy of you!
Invader Johnny
2009-07-25 . chapter 1
Wow, seemes to me that "FWD" may have been your favorite episode since you descrived it perfectly, from Danny to Sam and finally to Tucker“s POV.

I dunno but I THINK that all the drama for that episode was the higlight for Sam and Danny relationship thing, you pointed out many things that I never took notice off so uh you have good eye for that sorta thing I guess.

Invader Johnny Signing Off.
Super-Berry
2009-07-24 . chapter 1
Well another well done piece, by a decent author. I'm guessing the episode "FWD" is something your really interested in? I am too, but I just don't like Sam getting her heart broken into two. I give her props of letting him go and being happy. That's a good friend, but also something along the lines of true love in my opinion. I just get pissed off when I have to read or hear about this episode. I guess it's because you finally see a lot emotion from Danny liking Valerie that you never see in other episodes that he shows to Sam. I want to add that this extremely well written, but you should consider adding another chapter to this on DCMH in the same point of view. Sorry about my outburst on Danny and Valerie, or the episode (Hopefully I didn't upset you). I hope see more from you soon!
DragonDancer5150
2009-07-24 . chapter 1
As always, I think you NAIL Tucker's voice incredibly well. And I really liked seeing /his/ take on everything. Yeah, the same territory is tread three times now (the first two with the H&H chapters) but because everyone sees and focuses on something different, they're still somehow three separate tales, which is amazing.

YAY XD
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