The grandmother's conversation with her son cleared a lot of things up. I love how the boa constrictor wanted Harry to mate with Tamaki! I hope you find inspiration for this soon so you can continue.

cheers, cen

A bit surreal how Tamaki's grandmother knows the Potter family. I liked their interaction, however, and I'm wondering how much she knows about the Potters and their -er- associations.

I like too how she wants Harry for a grandson-in-law. I thought, though, that Japan didn't have gay marriage, but I could be wrong, and it doesn't really matter. It makes for a great story. I wonder how they would get heirs ... hmm. ...

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I liked what you did with the tattoo as well as the healer's attitude toward it. The end had me a bit confused. I'm on the verge of sleeping and I somehow thought I was being tricked into a dream sequence, but then I realized it wasn't, but it was still surreal.

Glad Harry and Tamaki, though, are going to the fair together.

oh, and Sirius using Veritaserum is amazing!! I can so see him doing that in some ways.

cheers, cen

*rofl* oh the ending was just *so* good. when exactly does this take place in the hp timeline? I've been a bit confused about that, though I could have easily missed some note somewhere.

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1. I really like how you've introduced femmeslash. Normally I don't read it because it comes off both fake and just, well, basically as really bad pornography (at least I hope it's bad. If what I've come across is good, then I can't imagine how much worse it can get). Very understated, beautifully written, and it gets inside Haruki's head. I'm looking forward to that development as well as her crush's potential reaction when she realizes she's fallen for another girl.

2. the confession. gorgeous. I love how it blew up and how sincere Tamaki was in his attentions. That was my favorite part of the whole chapter.

3. the end. hilarious! he he he!

cheers, cen

Confused about how a ferris wheel would come up since they've already gone to the amusement park ... but I'm waiting with bated breath to see how Harry reacts to such a scenario. oh, this is going to be great ...

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p.s. you've now officially converted me to this crossover (harry potter and ouran high school host club). -cen

"Harry could tell if he was in an anime he would have a vein just twitching in his forehead, this was just too ridiculous."

That line made me crack up!

Great job. I like how you're developing their relationship slowly and realistically given their characters and the fact that Harry can't stand Tamaki.

cheers, cen

oh, tamaki *sighs*

cen

you brought in tarot! brava! It's underdone and under appreciated my opinion. cheers, cen

... still smiling! ...

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Hilarious! I'm incredibly sleep deprived and I just kept on cracking up. Can't wait to see what happens next chapter ...

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I find your story really funny ! Is the grandmother of tamaki a witch ?

So I was looking for this Sirius/Remus fic 'Girls' that I read YEARS ago, and I'm looking at the characters listed... I mean, there's all these people that show up in the series for three seconds, and then there's freaking Kakashi and over a thousand in the OC category... And then I see 'Tamaki S.' I was like "...No. That isn't..." But it IS. XD

I applaud your epic-ness. It's actually somewhat believable, and your have Hani and Tamaki's characterizations down very well. ...Oh my god, there's ELEVEN CHAPTERS?!? o.0

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*goes to read*

love this story so far i cant wait 4 the next chapter

i love the snake, it so funny & i'm a big snake fan. very good chapter