that was awesome i love our storyline hope you can make a another awesome chapter can't wait

Love the story PLEASE UPDATE!

One word, this story is beautiful. I don't know the last time that I thought of that word for this story, but there's no other word for it. I was kind of skeptical when I clicked on this story at first- I normally hate pairings within the Akatsuki/alternate universes with naruto characters being on Earth. But you made it perfect- just beautifully. I came looking for some light humour and got it, but some real heartwarming stuff as well. This story looked crude by the title but when one actually reads it through, they end up with (not trying to sound cheesy or anything here) A warm mushy feeling in their heart, feeling as if everything's going to be all right.

Keep writing, this is amazing!

please write more soon. i really like it... wow this song fits this story so well.

Cute story so far!

Poor Hidan... Nice transition chapter.

LOL theres never to many swear words for Hidan.

Please please please upload more soon !

I LOVE THIS

and have cried a few times in it D:

please upload more soon

x

i dont get it i thought konan and pein were kakuzu's parents so how can pein be hidan's dead boyfriend

I cant wait for the next update thanks for the story. by the way you might want to change peins name in drunken stupor, lol just thought i'd point that out, but i am sure someone else already has...maybe...lol ;] otherwise, its a good story.

YAY! WHENS THE NEXT CHAPTER OUT? XD cant wait!

XD Doesn't Hidan know that the cake is a lie?

ihadtodoit lol *shot*

This is nice- a bit sad- but that's nice... xD I look forward to updates.

Very nice, so far! I noticed you had a little trouble with names *cough*Pein was two people*cough* but you sorta fixed it later, so it's fine I'm really liking it, I think it's totally sweet... Can't wait for the rest, if there's more... :D

Okay, as of chapter 1, I'm weirded out, but I will keep going... I *might* put up reviews for several chapters, even though I usually wait 'til the end, but this is... Well, the eating metaphors went a *little* too far, -I- almost got a stomach ache, but I love high school shōnen ai, something about the awkwardness... so I'm betting this will be pretty good. Yay. On to chapter 2... ya, I'm just gonna write another review at the end. Can't wait! *click*