O MY GOD, Jake been avoiding Nessie, does that mean he likes Chantel ?

So glad you updated :)

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1. Spell check all story and poetry. There is no excuse for not performing this duty. If you do not have a word processor that has the spell checking feature, use a search engine such as to find one.

2. Proofread all entries for grammar and other aspects of writing before submission. 'Hot off the press' content is often riddled with errors. No one is perfect but it is the duty of the writer to perform to the best of his/her ability.

5. Use proper textual formatting. For example: using only capital letters in the story title, summary, or content is not only incorrect but also a disregard for the language itself.

Keep up the good work, I can't wait to see what's going to happen next,

Glad she's found a friend in Seth.

Love it, yeah she thinks Jake's hot :)

Please write more...

Great start, I love stories with other mythical creatives, can't wait for the next chapter :)