I'm enjoying this story. Let's see, you have Rose, Martha, Sarah Jane and Jack. Will there be more before the end? Hope so!

Yeah CAptian JAck YEah

So who was the guide in this chapter, the first was Rose the second Martha so who was this one

Man, is floor 500 a reference she wouldn't get.
Anyways, when'd you fall into Alice in Wonderland?
Nicely done. When this thing is all over, i'll reread it and look for all the metaphors.
Keep writing!

Not as creepy as it could have been. Nowhere near. Makes me think that the ending of this will be happy. Keep writing!

Hmm, I wonder how this will work out.. Well done! Please update soon.

Yay! Love this =D

Would be a longer reivew, but I'm frazzled.
Hope for more soon!

~Azure

*grinns*
Can't wait to read more, Donna's got a journey to make, eh.

Oh, very interesting. Where does it lead? I'm dying to find out. Why do I have a feeling it's to Donna's memory? Love how Rose changed into Martha, as well as how you seem to be, somewhat, going through past adventures the Doctor has had . . . well, sort of. Maybe not. I mean, you've got Martha taking her to the Globe and Rose took her to someplace snowy and the first thing I thought of was the Ood Planet (Rose might not have been there, but she's met the Ood, so yeah).

Maybe I'm wrong or just seeing things, but I'm definitely excited to see where this'll go!! :D

Really interesting so far, please continue!

Nice one, chibi! I enjoyed reading the Shakespeare. If you think simply writing out the lines in hard, trying writing a paper on it.
Keep writing!

Hark! Dost now the bells tolleth for me?
Nay! but for a while I dance to the sound and fury
of the nameless tune played by a whyly Laird

Tis time to harken onto days past
whilst the Noble Lady Donna wonders far afield
to what end, the Laird of Thyme wilst soon reveal!

Just a silly nonsesical piece for you to try to fugure out LOL!

BTW, I purpously put the pun in there.

this is a strange but intrigueing chapter!

YAYSHAKESPEARE =D
YAYCHAPTER =D
Awesome. Love this, I can't wait to... find out what's going on. More real soon please!

~Azure

Weird... I'm liking it. But not Martha. -throws a brick at Martha-
Can't stop to chat, gotta read the next chapter. ;D

~Azure

Ooh, me likey!

Not quite!Rose and not quite!Martha! *waves*

This is a little bit reminiscent of that place in "Forest of the Dead", isn't it? :)