I love this fic. Its got probably the best sticky!smut I have ever read in this fandom, and its fun and plot-ty. I do so love plot. I very much look forward to future chapters, but I have a question. I really like the PB&J, but is there any chance of Bee getting a taste of anyone else on his top 5 list? And is there any chance of getting a little of Ratchet's med-bay action? And/or maybe some more twins/anyone?

Yes, you updated! Sorry about being so late (my computer just loves to screw with me!) KK, starting off: OMG SO DAMN CUTE! Jazz, Prowl and Bumblebee are like the most perfect couple EVER. The way they interact and alway showered each other with affection... The BEST and CUTEST EVER!! And, of course, a jelous Prowl is utterly awsome! Will we be seeing a bit more of Prowl facing off the twins? i hope so! (that's a battle i'd pay to see!).

And that was sweet how the twins went to see if Bumblebee was ok. That really are soft on the inside, arn't they? ("I'll send Bee your love when I get back, shall I?" = GOLD. Especially since Jazz was REALLY sending Bee love when he got back!)

Man, the conversation with Wheeljack and Jazz was extremely hilarious! Wheeljack's such a sweetie, and Jazz is just good ol' loveable Jazz. I just love the life you put into your characters. Everyone's just so... awsome.And Hound and Mirage, huh? Aw!! The huge insights you did (on EVERYONE) were amazing. i especially liked Prowl's. "If you don;t like me the way I am, frag off." That's epic. So was Jazz's 'Why change something that's already perfect?" I swear, I sqealed so loud my dog is now deaf. Or at least very wary of me now.

But, the main thing I needed to sya about this chapter: POOR LITTLE BUMBLEBEE! Everything he went through... The poor little thing. Escpecially with that bastard Decepticon. Although that would have been quite a sight- two bright yellow mechs the life of the party. Is he going to show up? I'd like to see him get his aft kicked into the centre of the eatrth by Jazz and Prowl. The twins helping would be make my day! :D

And the smut: MUCH NEEDED. I swear, you are some kind of mechsmut god! Go you! And, as aways, keep writing!! :D :D (looking forward to how the twins react in the next chappie!!)

O...what will they do? :O
I want to know!
keep up the great work and update soon :D

Thank you for updating. I was getting worried. This is one of my most favorite stories,and a update is like a treat, Halloween, and Christmas all wrapped up in one. Please continue, and update frequently.

Whoa, yeah, definitely liked this one! Hm, maybe you can get some Jazz, Bumblebee and Twins together in the next one. I think some twin loving could spice things up nicely with the trio, or various members of the trio. Anyways, good job with this chapter, loved it!

(Wide cat grin on face) Oh Deeath. I have a present for you. I really like(love) the chapter you wrote. I didn’t review right away because I wanted to finish the present.

^w^ the chap is like twenty-eight pages of smut (brilliant!) I really like the back-story you put in the chapter, do you think either Igniter (teehee) or Sunstorm might be making an appearance? I’m so happy for the update and to quote Sam ‘my low self esteem is at an all time high’ after I read the foreword. (mew love!) I hope you like your present. weeping-cheetah (dot) deviantart (dot) com/art/Caught-a-buzzed-Bumblebee-145342767

PS: gentle with the twins? I really do like them a lot and would be sad to see them hurt.

Lol okay okay. I love this fic so far. Totally hot and cute, especially Bee. Poor thing, you seem to really like torturing him, especially in your other fic. But I like it so far. Maybe a little more emotional interaction with our new favorite threesome? Idk, but seriously good job. Keep up the good work.

ah, wow. I'm just so *brilliant*- I reviewed chapter one instead of chapter six! Just so it makes more sense :) I'd love to see more of the twins!! That chapter with them and Bee- *gasp* it was amazing! And Jazz is lovely, too :D and Prowl. Of course :)
Can't wait to read the next chapter!! Is it soon? Is it? Please?

*fangirl scream*

THAT WAS AWESOME!! XD Wa, poor Bee! How dare those evil mechs do that to him! I hope Jazz and Prowl see Sunstorm in battle and beat the CRAP OUT OF HIM! GR!!

LOL Nobody will be able to look at anybody for a few orns! XD Poor Jack, he's forever traumatized.

I can't wait to see what the twins will say. I hope they stay friends and stuff. Don't make them suffer! XD

GREAT CHAPT!!

hello! I figured that I really oughta stop reading this story just on my itouch because when I do, I feel less inclined to review because that teeny tiny little keyboard... it isn't nice to me.
Anyways! I love all the mech smut. My oh my... Rarely have I ever read anything quite this good. (now that sounded like that "never have I ever" game..) I intensely wish I could write smut this amazing :)
I can't wait for the next chapter! Will there be Twins smut? With anyone? *crosses fingers and hopes real hard*
So, anyways. Just to sum up: LOVED IT!

All the smuttiness. I love it.

C.D.

good gosh, you sure know how to make things really hot!

very great this was

Briilaint! This was hot amd naughty and really fun to read! Loved it!

That was wonderful. The emotional parts were so sweet! Thanks for the update! I look forward to the next.

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updates :D
i highly approve this