I love this song by Owl City, it's a great chose!

Very cool. To put a song such as "Vanilla Twilight" with something like is really unique, in my opinion. This is because you took Bella's longing for Edward and the longing that can be found in the song and mixed it with Bella's pain, aggression, and spite for Edward and her insecurities that followed his departure. Put into a songfic like this and you come out with a really strong story.

One quick note of warning, there were a few errors in the spelling which (as the reader) messed me up. One was that "certain" was spelled "cretin" in the passage about Bella's friends. In the same part about Bella's friends "there minds" should be the possesive "their minds". Also the passage "I like it better then the lies he feed me" I think should be "I like it better then the lies he fed me."

But keep in mind that these corrections are very nit-picky and should not trump the fact that this is a really enjoyable story. Great job!

Great song, Great story xD

Definitely deserves more reviews

Why has nobody reviewed this story? This story deserves more reviews than just mine.

I loved this story, and to me, I was suprised at the end. A good thing for you to do with your reader and there was also a good flow to it.

Nice job. I hope you continue and I hope you get more reviews.

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