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Nata247
2009-08-18 . chapter 1
I love this story! Chef/DJ's mom is the best. Aleast in this story. Anyways love the story right more if you can.
monkey
2009-08-07 . chapter 1
cool story you should make a sequeal like for the wedding
@!#
2009-07-29 . chapter 1
you got to add at least one more chapter. It feels like you left it on a clif-hanger.
Withluvcherri
2009-07-26 . chapter 1
Ooh, I like :) I don't think a pairing like that has been done before...lol
Update soon!
cyrus
2009-07-25 . chapter 1
update quick
anonymousreader07
2009-07-25 . chapter 1
Wow I like the idea of Chef and DJ being secretly related. Great idea, nice story to!
Purplerain105
2009-07-25 . chapter 1
Nice! I think you should add more chapters, to keep this story going though! I really need to work on my story too though, it's Called The Black Scarf, I just uploaded it a minute ago, so you might now see it until tomarrow though. It's a Duncan Gwen fan fiction. I hope you read it, just like how I will be reading your stories!
hjhj
2009-07-25 . chapter 1
Oh. My. GOD! LOL!!
Kelsica2
2009-07-25 . chapter 1
First you make me like Deva, now Chef/DJ's Momma!

This is so totally awesome! I never thought I would like Chef paired up with anybody, but now I do :3 And the twist, nice touch!

So awesome! I lurve it! :D
Juan Jose Rodriguez
2009-07-25 . chapter 1
Only one mistake - DJ's mom is Jamaican. Oh man, this is great! Not only is it flawless grammar & original, it's unexpected & great! Good job!
LogicalTiger
2009-07-25 . chapter 1
Holy f**king crap Greenie... too epic for words. Ezcept those that I just typed, of course.
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