I don't know whether I read the date right or not, but I saw that this was last updated in April last year! Really, it's an awesome story, and so well written that it makes me wonder whether you're a professional! You should totally update this again, I really wanna see where the story goes, and I can't wait for the fluff)

Please, oh please update! This story is AMAZING!

This is really good, you have to update!

I thought this was a romance?Whereis allthe interactione between Edmund and Agatha?I am sorry say that even though the adventure is awsome,I am a bit dissapointed for the lack of fluff:(

Awww, Peridan. There's someone in the past and he misses her... Sniff. The bar was nicely atomospheric and rough and oh poor Coriakin being a former star is on easy on him now, is it. And Isolde certainly has an entertaining sister. I admit I had a bad feeling about the quotes at the beginning of the story, so I suspect we will be seeing more along those themes later.

In chapitah 7, did you mean "doornob fetish"?

I forgot to congratulate you last chapter for making the 50,0 word mark! It's a really great accomplishment that I have yet to do. Congrats!

The epigraphs for this part are very somber. I'm guessing the story will become even dark now, and we will learn more about Agatha's past?

I love that you're continuing to define and develop more of your characters. The scene between Isolde and her sister was hilarious, and a little heart-breaking. Her poor sister, stuck on a desolate island, never hearing from her.

The scene between Lucy and Peridan was cute. I can't wait to see WHY Peridan is so anxious.

Just curious; in your last reply to me, you said that in the last part, more will be developed. Do you mean this is the last part, or is there more to come?
There's so much going on, I can't wait to see how you tie it all together!

This is a lovely chapter, and I'm still waiting to see why Peridan is so uncomfortable with Lucy, or Lucille, which is a pretty cool name, by the way.

Agatha, Isolde, Edmund and Peter are AWESHUM!
And Isolde has a sister that's flirtatious! :L I wouldn't have seen that coming D
Update soon!

Haha, I like Isabelle!
Is Peridan married already or does he like someone in the place they are at? Because he "looked pained and dead in the eyes" and I also got that impression. Or maybe I'm wrong...
Please, please, please, UPDATE your story as soon as possible! )

Ah. That was nice! A nice eventful chapter.
Update soon.

Woot! Lovely chapter, Ewcom! Poor Peter, he's always a target. I loved the little chat with Isabelle, and the scene in the bar. Can't wait for your next update!

Aslan's Blesings,
Fierce

DANG IT ALL! I just lost the whole review I had been writing as I was reading.
I think I remember the finer points that I wrote down though. Let me try to reconstruct
It's downright hilarious when the chick on the doorstep whistles at Edmund and Peter. Just great. I love that Agatha scowls at it, hehe... I can't wait to see a bit of her/Edmund flirting xD. It's even funnier when we find out that it's Isolde's sister on the steps!
PINK CHEMISE! (If you don't remember why I find that utterly amusing, do ask. :D
Peter is such a ladies' man, lol.

FIGHT FIGHT FIGHT!

Aww, I was hoping to see somebody throw some punches...

I did enjoy the humor in that part, though. "Inarticulate too!" Oh, Edmund...he always makes me laugh in your chapters...

The part with Lucy and Peridan is really sweet! It makes me wonder what's going on, though. I don't REMEMBER you mentioning sticking those two together, but it LOOKS like it. Kinda. I guess I'll just have to wait and see...
Great chapter, EWCOM!

AH! I'm falling SO far behind! You've already updated!

Well, I must say, I really enjoyed this chapter. It was great to learn more about Agatha. With such a large cast of characters, it's hard to develop each one, so it's great to see you doing that. It's also great to see you returning to the beginning of the fic, and letting us see more of Agatha's parents. (And Aral!
Great chapter, and looking forward to the next!

Well, /Lucy's/ in hot water, for sure!
But HUZZAH! for the double-teaming of Ed and Peter! XD I was cheering during their brief but oh-so-entertaining fight witht he drunkard. Very nice. Very synchronized. _

I really liked this chapter! I hope all goes well for our heros.
Good luck with the next update!

As Always,-Tonzura123

In reference to your A/N, how'd you figure that one out? xD Did you just have that many pages on Word or something? Well, it's kinda interesting to know, anyways. (And I'll bet it DOES feel like a great accomplishment.) Good job! :D

I was trying to figure out what was going on at the beginning at first I figured it must be Agatha and Edmund going to the Council. But then I saw Benedick and remembered, "Oh! Agatha's dad!" That name just cracks me up, I must say. I do LIKE his and Hermia's names, however. Somehow, they fit incredibly nicely together as a couple, and with the setting.
I wonder what the purpose of this interlude was? Not trying to be mocking or whatever, but I'm genuinely curious. It does kinda set everything up, but it doesn't give any additional information. ALTHOUGH, it DOES give us a look so that way we have background info on what happened the first time in case the Gebonyians bring it up at the next Council. Maybe that's it. Oh well. I'm just curious to see what happens next, now!
Also, you didn't really IMPLY this, but I had the strangest impression that this was the day of what happened in the prologue. It just kinda fits. Perhaps, angry at them shooting down his idea, the Gebony representative followed Benedick and Hermia and killed them. The idea just kinda popped in my head and I found that interesting...
It made me laugh to see Agatha playing with blocks with Aral. She was kinda adorable xD.
I can't wait to see the next chapter! :D