I quite enjoyed what Iread here. You've got quite some talent with words.

great story, i hope you'll continue this if it isn't finished yet!

This is a heart achingly realistic story about postwar Orihime... maybe she's not ready for all that so soon, but you capture this kind of moment perfectly. I love it, even if my inner Ishihime fangirl is a bit sad. Would you write a second chapter? :]

I hope you continue updating! This is very interesting!

But you are brave Orihime!