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cjjs
2009-11-30 . chapter 24
A wonderful chapter. Probably one of my favorites so far. It was full of drama, the desperate standoff between Eddie, Harold, and Jill got my pulse a little higher than normal, and then the zombie strm of the warehouse got it downright pounding. Very very well done!
Starlight-Ninja
2009-11-29 . chapter 23
Well, that's more than she had in the game. Update as soon as you feel like it; I know writer's laziness very well, and its almost as bad as writer's block.
cjjs
2009-11-23 . chapter 23
Great to see an update. No need to apologise for uploading chapters slowly though. Quality will alway trump quantity in my books.

I must say, I admire Miss Wong's tenacity. She is a professional survivor, and you do a good job portraying her as such.
half-brain
2009-11-16 . chapter 1
jeez. most fan fics i read aren't that vivid. very good job; i wish i could write like that. keep it up.
Starlight-Ninja
2009-11-11 . chapter 22
Poor Kendo. At least his death here was better than it was in the game. Update soon please.
cjjs
2009-11-09 . chapter 22
Great Chapter! I always liked the little scene fron RES with Kendo ad Claire. I'm glad that you elaborated on it.
Starlight-Ninja
2009-11-03 . chapter 21
I really like how you show different side characters and extend the story. If only more of them didn't die "on the spot", if you know what I mean.

I don't blame you for forgetting to update. Its harder to maintain a set schedule then most people think. Update soon, please.
cjjs
2009-11-02 . chapter 21
Yup Leon, you should have seen it coming.

Great chapter!
Starlight-Ninja
2009-10-27 . chapter 19
Sometimes the laws of physics can be a pain in the butt. If only bullets couldn't break glass...
cjjs
2009-10-19 . chapter 19
It's been a while since I've reviewed this. I actually missed the Leon Chapter altogether. When I clicked on the link it took me to Claire, and I assumed that was all you had up. whoops!

I really like your tweaks to Leon's character, making him ex delta force and a bit older works well.

This story (or series of stories) just might be my all time favorite RE fanfic. Fantastic job.
Starlight-Ninja
2009-10-14 . chapter 18
I think that giving Leon and Claire there own personalities was a good idea. And having Leon wear his RE4 outfit was a nice touch. Update soon, please.
cjjs
2009-10-04 . chapter 16
I really like this chapter, mainly because I really like Michail. He was a competent soldier who sacrified himself so that Jill and Caros could survive, truly RE3's unsung hero.
Starlight-Ninja
2009-10-03 . chapter 15
Go figure Nicholai would try to kill him.

Just out of curiosity, what games do you plan on using for your series? Is it just the main seven, or are you including a few spin offs like Outbreak and Dead Aim?
Sethlon
2009-09-28 . chapter 15
Just now finished reading through all you have out so far for the Legends series, and its simply amazing. You do an incredible job on turning the resident evil series into a realistic event instead of a B movie horror flick.

The villains are especially interesting, much more two dimensional than the games. I've found myself more interested in Wesker than most of the protagonists in the story.

The one constructive criticism that I can give is that chapters have the occasional type-o, sometimes using the wrong word or having extra words where it seems like you decided to construct the sentence a different way but forgot to erase a word or two. Doesn't really disrupt the story, though.

Again, amazing work. I look forward to my weekly alert saying you've updated.
Starlight-Ninja
2009-09-21 . chapter 14
Stuck in a warehouse. One of the worst places to be trapped (unless it stores canned food, then you couldn't be stuck anywhere better). Update soon, please.
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