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HyperCaz
2009-08-05 . chapter 1
you posted it! :D :D And I love it, as always. Perfect characterisation. Multiple thumbs up. :D
Kaytee33
2009-07-29 . chapter 1
nice :)
pain in the mikta
2009-07-28 . chapter 1
Very sweet and nice!
BettyHall223
2009-07-28 . chapter 1
Very cute. Thanks for the smile.
pinkelephant
2009-07-27 . chapter 1
“Ack, forget it,” Jack protested, and grabbed the tray. “You’ve done your bit. I’ll take it there in the morning.”

“You mean you’ll have Walter take it there,” Sam offered with a grin.

“Pragmatics…”

without a doubt my favourite bit... this is real good. you write them very well and it was so sweet. the title's cool too.
SpaceMan41
2009-07-27 . chapter 1
Very cute, very fun.
Thara June
2009-07-27 . chapter 1
Sweet ... and the cake isn't the only reason for me to say that ... ;-)

THX

God bless you!

Thara
Natters
2009-07-27 . chapter 1
lolol
stusue
2009-07-26 . chapter 1
Lovely short story. I can just see that happening. Now I'd like to read about the following Friday night at O'Malley's! :o)
SoloFalcon
2009-07-26 . chapter 1
Nicely done!
Great balance between the friendship and romance...

LOL and great characterization too!
Athena121
2009-07-26 . chapter 1
Perfect! Just the right amount of fluff and SGC to make it the perfect Sam Jack read. :)
Taylor
2009-07-26 . chapter 1
Its a great story. The only error is that Walter calls Sam 'Major Carter' instead of Colonel or just Carter. WOnder Why?
Otherwise the story is really great. Good Job
three.steps
2009-07-26 . chapter 1
Really good story. Everyone was perfectly in character, I loved it :D
sg1fangirl
2009-07-26 . chapter 1
“I swear it exists.” That is SO Jack. I like your characterization, very nice fic you got here, although I could have done with some more shippiness, but still... nice!
Gina
2009-07-26 . chapter 1
How lovely! I think you have the characters spot on, and the impromptu hug at the end was so sweet. I agree that you can think of this fic as a deep friendship, or a more "harbouring romance" type of thing. And I loved the Walter cameo! Great job!
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