Slap him Donna, slap him!
This is awesome, like all your stories...

Looks like it is going to be awesome, and I love your descrip of the new master.
Heh tardis van. At least one time lord knows how to be subtle.

Donna, Donna, Donna, you're really in a pickle. The Master's never up to anything good, and now you're in the middle of it! When she finds out the Doctor's wiped her memory, she's gonna hate the Doctor and turn towards the Master, the man who helped her remember. Ick! Donna, you've gotta stay good, and stay far, far away from turning to the dark side. Watch the dark side all you want, but don't become a part of it! agh!!

you've definitely got me interested, excited for more! :D

Sorry it's taken so long to review; have been at my friend's house for the past few days. XD
But AWESOME stuffs. =D Love the whole 'Master of the Universe' - really shows how... erm... insane he is. =P

~Azure

Donna and the Master would be AWESOME together.
*hatches plan to force BBC into another spin-off*
urh...
update soon! :D

Why? Oh why are there twilight references in this?

Hm The Master with a white van in 1921, can't wait to see what they will think of his van in 1800's :D LOL...
I can't wait to see what happens next... good job:D

AWESOMENES!

Hmm, I don't remember the second half of this - original, I take it? Anyway, well done. I especially liked when Donna commented on the Master's name; everybody always asks "Doctor What?" when the Doctor introduces himself, but no one ever asks "Master Of What" when the Master introduces himself.
Anyway, keep up the good work.
Zim'sMostLoyalServant signing off.

Is this a "Donna goes with the Master instead of the Doctor" story? Looking forward to more. Keep writing!

WOWZEE!
A nacho cheese, and QUACKILY cool chapter!!
Hehe! A TARDIS in the shape of a van! Genius!?! Vair, vair original!!
WHAT?! The Master is with Donna... *pointedly sniffs and throws rhubarbs at Master* WHAT YOU UP TO MASTER MAN?!?!
LuuRving your characterisations, and this 'fic has deffo hypnotised me even more!
Heehaw!
GrooVILY GRASS STUFF!
=D =D =D =D =D

Oo. -pets chibi!Ianto and is bitten by chibi!Jack-
Soo is this the Doctor or the Master or the Black Guardian or what?

THis is wonderful!
I love the Master and Donna!
great job!

YAYZEE! Along with chibi!Ianto and chibi!coffee, could you throw in a chibi!Myfanwy and chibi!Janet too?! PLEASE!! I give you slippers... HEEHAW!
Anyways!
I am vair, vair intrigued and sparkle-eyes, by this first chap!! This story has already been promoted to CheeseOnToastWorthy!
Oo-er, the Master?!?
=D =D =D =D =D

Ah, I was waiting for you to put this up. Can't wait to see where you go with this once you've put up all of the parts you've already posted in "What If".
Keep up the good work.
Zim'sMostLoyalServant signing off.