Gosh, I love both Pansy and Astoria to pieces, and you pictured them both PERFECTLY here. Their talk was so sharp and harsh, in a way, and yet as you said, so very CIVIL. So delightfully Slytherin. And your last line was brilliant. Loved this to death )

so why was pansy there

Really good.

I like it!

Something about the faceless character of Astoria is so interesting to me and your vision of her is one I am expecting to be true: A well-bred Slytherin women who marries for status but gains love.

I like how your Pansy is still pinning over her lost love (what happens between Draco and her I wonder?). I've been looking for stories with Pansy in this situation.

Though I have to say, I am not a fan of the idea of Draco still retaining feelings for Pansy, as your story seems to suggest, though, your story protrayed the idea quite well. Very nice job, and I am hoping to see more stories surrounding these characters in the future.

you are really a fantastic author. there's just so much emotion in your writing. it's so tangible and realistic and allows the reader to relate. i loved it, i loved a lot

Ouch...vicious sort of encounter wasn't it... Huh. Brilliant writing though, loved reading (and very much enjoyed the cameo by Scorpius :D)

This was lovely, and fills in a gap that needed some patching-up. I'm sure Pansy feels very bitter about being thrown over by Draco, but she should have known that a Malfoy would never marry his Hogwarts whore.

I don't usually like stories where Pansy can't seem to let go of the past (esp. when she's portrayed as shallow, shallow people usually don't care?) But this one-shot took so many braincells to figure out I just had to comment. I like the acid rain references, I take it that Draco is also bitter about the wedding. I like the idea that Astoria is very Slytherin like and married Draco for status, but then developed feelings for him. Pansy was creepy though, the keeping her eyes on Scorpius thing.

Well, I'm biased I was a D/P fan when I was a fan of the HP series...

i really liked this. it really showed how they hated eachother. twas a spiffy little fic, and i love how you portrayed them. good job!

I love the changes you made, it gives me a much better view of Astoria, and how she feels about her family. And I think I've mentioned this before, but I love your writing style, it portrays your characters' emotions thoroughly and it's lovely. Also, thanks for the recommendation :D

Terrific job, and keep writing!

exceptionally brilliant.

love the 2 acid rain parts.