Sweet

Great as always funny that he feared attachment then...Bam! Great job again.

Aww, cute! Anakin doesn't have many friends. No wonder with that attitude. Good job.

You have SO MANY stories, I always forget which ones I've read and which ones not... Whoops...

Very nice story. I liked how you showed the darker, more cynical side of friendship in the opening part of your chapter, perhaps hinting at Anakin's fate, and then contrasted it with the lighter side of it in the end of the chapter. I like your gregarious, upbeat Darra, and I only wish that you would write more:)

Good story, though not your usual poetry I read. It was good and had a little humorous tone to it which I like. I'm moving to a new star wars story, I'll try to read as many of your as I can, at least the ones I understand. lol

Once again a beautiful piece from Miss Thunder!

I liked how the beginning hinted at Anakin's turn to the Sith, as well as the outgoing character of Darra. The character's clashed, but in a good way.

The only thing is that the ending seemed a bit cut off. Overall, very good.

That's cute. you should continue on with that.