VERY GOOD! Although quite depressing, don't you think.

Please, be good and write more. A second chapter where we can see what feel Jane, eh?

...and a third with a happy end? _

Please, answer me. I like very much your other stories. Would you want to keep a contact?

pretty good fic pleez continue

I'll flame you if you really want me to, but I think it's a pretty well done work. So Bleh! Flames on your want for flames!

great start! you should expand on this. keep writing, you're really good at it!