 Patricia de Lioncourt 11/16/04 . chapter 1This is so great! Why isn't it finished? I know it was cancelled, but come on! You're living the dream! This is so well written! |
 Vince 11/9/02 . chapter 1 Finish this story! It's freiken great! oh, and we're still waitin' for Eyes of a dhampire and blood of a dhampire to finish |
 Erika 10/30/02 . chapter 1 Great story! I want to read more.) |
 Unbeliever 1/28/02 . chapter 1 Great work! Finish it. |
 BloodMoon 1/12/02 . chapter 1 Looks good so far. Keep it up! |
 NecroVMX 1/5/02 . chapter 1 A bit cutesy, but written quite well, I enjoyed. |
 Lnchbx16 1/3/02 . chapter 1VERY GOOD STORY, clever, I can't wait for more, but characters from 1450 and 1917 don't usually talk like kids from modern times, just tellin if u were shootin for realism
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