lay off with the Bowie stuff
i know its fun but it gets old pretty quick

I like this one too! Katie good writer)

katie..awesome story! lovin it! wel..i hguess now u have to write another one...hehehe

GREAT! mushy. But over all a wonderfully written story. I must say one thing. Prepare for a smack on the head for the "Dotn screw it up more" comment! :P you butt! Well i loved it! write another story sometime k! Luv the real Carmen!

awwwww how sweet! Trevor and his "Coffee brown eyes" lol. Great story! Bravo!

Yea! I like it write a finishing chapter yea?

You get all brownie points plus 600 for letting me say "nice...-D Its a great story but i think it might need an ending dont you think?Lets finish huh! Well it was awesome the frustration and the jareth bit. lol good job!

Alright u get the brownie points back. Awesome story i love it!

Thanks for making my sound stupid.. geeze.. (Frustrated this frustrated that) well poopy on you. :P

haha poor "Carmen" heh heh. Yes write another chapter!

Cools... is gonna ger serious now or are you just fooling with my mind? IM CONFUSED! ok not really but anyway please continue...

Pretty darn cool...and while I *do* find Jareth attractive, I enjoy Jareth bashing as much as the next person. Oh, and could it be that Trevor is realizing that he made a mistake? Probably not. But, hey, can we get some actual Ewan time in it?

hehe! awesome! u better finish it! its funny...katie? im confused! hehe funny shit!

Im loving this story! Keep it coming the reviews will pour in! Your doign good!

Very cute, I enjoyed this alot and would like to see more.