Update soon? :)

I can't wait for an update! That was great.
I can't help but wonder if Abby will crack under the pressure...

Oo intrigue with the wallet/ID :D wonder what the deal is
Another great chapter! keep up the awesome-ness lol
Looking forward to your next update -TT

Fantastic chapter! I wonder why Abby all of a sudden wanted her wallet.
Keep up the great work!

-nikki. :)

Loved it

loved it!!

Oh boy. I can understand why she lied, and I love that Jimmy doesn't hesitate to back her up no matter what, but something tells me this is all going to come back to haunt them. None of the forensic evidence will match up with Abby's story. Oy. Great chapter and I can't wait for the next one.

Have I ever told you how much I loved this story? I can't recall, but I love it...A LOT.
Great chapter! I'm on the edge of my seat waiting for the next one!
And I'm SO excited for the Henry-multichaptered story!

~Nikki~

You're an amazing author. Absolutely love this so far, can't wait to see what happens next.
Elodie~

I get so excited when i see a new chapter up on this story! i love "being there" as things are unraveling and Jimmy's finding out what happened :) keep up the great work
Looking forward to your next update! -TT

Another wonderful chapter. You're doing an amazing job recounting their initial experiences, moment by moment. Abby worries me though, greatly. She's dissociating from everything that happened, and I do wonder how much of Henry's sordid story she's really going to tell, and how much she'll continue to allow herself to be burdened by.

Oh and I've always wondered if the murder in Seattle that Jimmy was questioned for was one of the Wakefield copycat ones that Henry committed. I could see Henry liking the symmetry in that.

fantastic chapter, the end was particularly good.

Ohmygoodness! Amazing. You have me craving the next chapter of this story.

Loved the ending!
Update soon :D

~Nikki~

Good chapter, I'm glad poor Jimmy is getting filled in!

I love this story so much!i especially like the part when jimmy tells abby he loves her and his thoughts afterwards, SO cute!you should be very proud of your work!:D
sorry i didnt review chapter 2, i was away so ill just say that it was brilliant!:D and i really like your chapter titles!they're quite creative!:D