U have to continue! I love this! It is very interesting!

Wow. I always wondered what happened in Jay's past that caused him to transfigure into the bad boy the girls all know and --let me put it this way -- lust after.

This is a good way of exploring that.
Keep up your awesome writing! :)

you have to keep going! I love it though it wasn't predictable like other stories.

*Dies*

I kinda want more. But you knew I was going to say that.

Did Sean, Spinner, and Alex buy this? It seems like Alex more or less has his number. I mean, we know that Manny fell for the Malta story, so she believes him, but the others? Hm.

I love this, though, especially the end.