Ohmigod how sad. :'( DAMN TEME! :( (referring to Naruto, no offence if anyone likes Naruto, cos I sure as hell don't)

Surprisingly, I can see that happening. But at the same time... I can't. Naruto just isn't that kind of guy y'know? But I did like it. Even though it didn't have a happy ending! *cries hysterically*

that was real good like all your stories keep up the good work

FOr what it's worth, I think this is a very good story. The plot is easy to understand, and the feelings are simple but poingant. I think that these kinds of relationships are sad 'cause they really happen, and poor guys like Kiba get stuck trying to fix them. :( but I luv Hinata, and I certainly hope that the 'real' Naruto never acts like that! :)

This was very well done. The sections were exactly the right length, and I do not think Kiba's point of view sounded off at all.

Excellent work. Extremely sad, and powerful.

Oh I've been there before, in Hinata's shoes. It hurts like crazy, I think a broken heart is the most painful thing one can expierence. Your one shot got me.

I know how it feels to be that ghost sometimes. It's too bad that Kiba wasn't able to save her. I hope that there is someone there to save you.