I know nothing of "Biker Mice From Mars," but after reading many of your other stories, I realized that whatever ELSE you write has to be quality work.

This was fun to read.
I dropped a line to let you know.

Sincerely,

Miriam

Go Charley!

EPIC!

Awsome story! lol

Very nice.

lol

Very good. Yes there are a few grammatic errors, but on the whole it's a very enjoyable read.

It's also just the sort of thing you can imagine Charley doing to the poor guys- but then again, the way they treat her sometimes, a little pay back's needed!

*laughs* PLEASE make this longer! This is very funny, and I'm adding it to my faves. Zingers...Poor guys!

Go Charlie so neat

love it please write a sequel or update.

Oh, so cute! This version of Charley and I would get along great. Your english translation if fairly good as well. There are a few mistakes, but nothing that henders the story. Wonderful bit of fiction. Thanks Lady Foxfire.

That was hilarious! And it seems just like the kind of thing Charley might do. :D

bad charley, very bad bad charley. lol

Cute, but you seem to be having trouble converting words into the proper form
Example: The BIKE Mice groaned

Should be: The BIKER Mice groaned

Another Example: In frustration Vinnie WALK to the window...

Should be: In frustration Vinnie WALKED to the window...
Sorry to nit-pick, but that's kinda my job. (And a smidgen more effort won't kill ya.)

*snickers* Oh, that's mean... I like it! I like it!